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by Angeline04/27/04

Weeds and love and Emily Dickinson!

Love how it all mixes in your imagination and spills out in poetry. :)

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by Anonymous04/27/04

lithosphere

"pick flowers, destroy our definitions of weeds
and Emily Dickinson?s herbarium
are all here
within the troposphere"

I swear I left a comment yesterday---
I have thought a great deal about the definition of weeds...but I cannot help but wonder if you are destroying poor Emily's herbarium or just its definition..... This piece was especially moving to me.

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by YDD04/27/04

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Interesting use of phrases,
but what "are all here"?
This line distracts me from the rest of the poem.

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