All Comments on 'MC-125 Ch. 14'

Thanks for continuing with your writing.

Please dont stop, just when its getting interesting. Whats to come of John, Samantha, Brianna & MC-125.

I really hope that you keep writing this story. I would just love to find out what happens to John and Samantha, and also if that other corp discovered their plan to take away MC-125.

I absolutely love this story! Please write more! Can't wait to read it.

Looks like a talented author may have graduated and moved on. I'll still hold on to the hope that u will return to this site with continuing chapters. You've got a great story line, plot and character development, the dialogue works and actually adds to the story: such a different experience from the typical zombie sex stories found under the "Mind Control" header. These later chapters are a genuine romance. LR, plz come back.

You should really finish the series!

I have sat here at my computer and read the entire series tonight. It is now 1:15AM and I'm not sorry. Excellent story, and I too wish you would finish it. I will be looking for the sequel to come out. Thanks for a good read.

Terrific story--just a shame that you can't finish it. You have a talent for story telling.

One more vote for finishing the story. I'm addicted!

fantastic series! please wirite more!

You can't just leave it like this!!!! This is too good not to have a proper ending, please!

Well, once again I find myself hooked on a series that seems to have died long ago. I really should read dates before starting a series. Well written, engaging. Excellent work. Wish it was complete.

That was such an original and engaging story. I would have loved knowing what happened to them characters.