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At Last!
Thanks for continuing with your writing.
Please continue
Please dont stop, just when its getting interesting. Whats to come of John, Samantha, Brianna & MC-125.
please keep writing
I really hope that you keep writing this story. I would just love to find out what happens to John and Samantha, and also if that other corp discovered their plan to take away MC-125.
wonderful!
I absolutely love this story! Please write more! Can't wait to read it.
Time flies
Looks like a talented author may have graduated and moved on. I'll still hold on to the hope that u will return to this site with continuing chapters. You've got a great story line, plot and character development, the dialogue works and actually adds to the story: such a different experience from the typical zombie sex stories found under the "Mind Control" header. These later chapters are a genuine romance. LR, plz come back.
MC-125
You should really finish the series!
It's 1:15
I have sat here at my computer and read the entire series tonight. It is now 1:15AM and I'm not sorry. Excellent story, and I too wish you would finish it. I will be looking for the sequel to come out. Thanks for a good read.
Terrific story
Terrific story--just a shame that you can't finish it. You have a talent for story telling.
Where have you gone?
One more vote for finishing the story. I'm addicted!
fantastic series! please wirite more!
fantastic series! please wirite more!
Come on!!!!!!
You can't just leave it like this!!!! This is too good not to have a proper ending, please!
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