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Something in this one...
grabbed me, something in the subtle wording, gentle images just works.
jim : )
I agree with Jim
This poem is a light touch--smooth. When you read it, there's not a single ripple in it.
*sigh*
This made me hold my breath in wonder. Well done!
~Merry
another
wonderful image
painted with that magic fantasy touch
I do love your stuff
thank you
Short and so good!
Great touch using "death chants" and "stain." They create a really nice tension that keeps the poem from being overly sweet. Love it!
hushed beauty
with the permeable scent of sadness
fallen rain
The title ties in nicely as a first line.
The sibilance at the end calls of rain sounds.
I enjoy the image and can almost feel the wet,
but I don't understand the root's "death chants".
Has there been a long drought?
Do the "stains" indicate this?
Lovely!
Short, but sweet! I liked this a lot!
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.
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