by gupiao
Get over yourself, quit rewriting already posted episodes and complete the damn story.
Have his mother come back as a college alum and sorority sister. Have mom peg his ass until he comes. Then have him fuck her and mistress. But finish the damn story.
One of these days, somebody is going to steal the story line and write chapter 34. Come on already, it has been more than 6 months since the last episode.
So he's come through oral, been sodomized, he's done oral on them, and they've really overdone the tantric femdom thing. He has "the largest penis they've ever seen", but everything he's done would be the same with a normal penis. Sure, visually it's more appealing but now you're almost wasting our time reading.
Penis -> Vagina.
Would like to see a story about Erika's journey. Maybe taking her from innocent coed to the confident trainer she is now.
It is proving difficult to write a sensible finish to this story .
Seriously?
You started this 32 chapters ago, it had promise
Then you did 20 chapters of repetition
Yes he’s got a very big cock and he’s not allowed to cum, we get it
Now you leave it at this stage?
I hope you feel ashamed
I really liked the story a lot. I have been waiting for the Halloween in May party ,not to mention all nighter with Chandra and company. I liked the flow. So many more places to go with this story hope you come back to it.
Amazing story keeping on the edge with training and accompanying sinarios now completed.
A new chapter begins for all on campus. Hot sexy naked edging restraint and release. Much more to cum and I look forward to your continued writing.
I'm assuming either the author lost interest or has been the unfortunate victim of a fatal disease since it has been nearly 8 years since the last episode. I was hoping for a reunion with Heather from the pool party. A reunion that would lead to new experiences for both resulting in unending orgasms. Just wishful thinking...