All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 33: The 5th Training Session'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ahhhh

Excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Finally!

3 times!?!? Well worth the wait, Great job!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It all seemed ....

very complicated .

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Patiently waiting

Looking forward to reading chapter 34!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I keep hoping to find an update but still nothing

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Yeah me too!?!?!?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
WTF

Get over yourself, quit rewriting already posted episodes and complete the damn story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Agree with WTF

Have his mother come back as a college alum and sorority sister. Have mom peg his ass until he comes. Then have him fuck her and mistress. But finish the damn story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

One of these days, somebody is going to steal the story line and write chapter 34. Come on already, it has been more than 6 months since the last episode.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Are you ever going to finish this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Is he ever going to fuck?

So he's come through oral, been sodomized, he's done oral on them, and they've really overdone the tantric femdom thing. He has "the largest penis they've ever seen", but everything he's done would be the same with a normal penis. Sure, visually it's more appealing but now you're almost wasting our time reading.

Penis -> Vagina.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just like Bill throughout the story, you need to finish!

Would like to see a story about Erika's journey. Maybe taking her from innocent coed to the confident trainer she is now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Predictably .....

It is proving difficult to write a sensible finish to this story .

homerman11209homerman11209almost 4 years ago
Come back!

Please write more. I love this series!

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBabout 2 years ago

Seriously?

You started this 32 chapters ago, it had promise

Then you did 20 chapters of repetition

Yes he’s got a very big cock and he’s not allowed to cum, we get it

Now you leave it at this stage?

I hope you feel ashamed

Gr8X2PlayGr8X2Playalmost 2 years ago

I really liked the story a lot. I have been waiting for the Halloween in May party ,not to mention all nighter with Chandra and company. I liked the flow. So many more places to go with this story hope you come back to it.

Hotstuff1PHotstuff1P11 months ago

Amazing story keeping on the edge with training and accompanying sinarios now completed.

A new chapter begins for all on campus. Hot sexy naked edging restraint and release. Much more to cum and I look forward to your continued writing.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I'm assuming either the author lost interest or has been the unfortunate victim of a fatal disease since it has been nearly 8 years since the last episode. I was hoping for a reunion with Heather from the pool party. A reunion that would lead to new experiences for both resulting in unending orgasms. Just wishful thinking...

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