1derful Tease Ch. 04

Great story!

Gets me all tingly.

Hot Blue

Four great stories, keep them coming as it sure keeps me coming. I love the stories and love the picture.

very hot!

Hey Kay,
Is it a true story in your life! So lively description of "fuckin". Your hot picture adds an extra kick to the reader! Want more soon--

Incredible

After finishing all four chapters I can honestly say that you have truly achieved an erotic statis with your work. It is very refeshing to have an actual storyline to follow and not just straight porn.
And by-the-way it is the best and hottest stuff i have personally read here. Please keep the stories coming and good luck!!

Wow

I love your stories Kay. The slow, teasing way in which you write so hot and sexy - just like your photo. There's no need to change either in my book :-)

Keep it up please!

I want to read more......................

I hope you are gonna finish the story......I want to read more.....This is one of the best stories......I need more.....

Thanks everyone!

Sorry I was away for a bit, I intend to get going on the next two chapters real soon and have them up asap. I am glad the stories are working for so many readers. That really is getting me excited to continue.

Keep in mind I am writing these stories not for any contest or any hidden reason. The only reason I am doing it for is all the appreciation. Even if it was just one person I would continue.

I am really thankful for all the nice comments, and feedback. I do read them all with a big smile. Some with wide eyes, but still a smile.

Thanks again,

Kay~

Very Arousing

I loved these stories I hope u continue it, I can't wait to read what happens next. Especially if they get his friends and her friends involved! ;)

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've never commented on a story before, but yours is so incredibly good I just had to. It gets at the heart of my most dark and secret fantasies. I especially enjoy the build ups and teasing, like when the girls exposed their pussies to Dad in the car and pretended that it was innocent. I hope you'll continue along that vein in the next installments. I can hardly wait!!!

more

hurry up i can't wait for the next chapter

Too Hot

This is the best set of stories i've read so far...please give me more...soon.

Amazing!!!

I know it's already been said but this set of stories was fantastic. I can't wait to see where you take it. I'm sooo looking forward to seeing him with her and her friend. Really want to see her friend and her together infront of him. I sincerely hope you continue these two together for a few more parts. Thanks soo much for giving us all something so phenominal to read and enjoy and dream about!!!

Amazing!!!

These stories are amazing!!! When are you coming out with the next chapter?? I can hardly wait to read about her and one of her dad's friends...

wow!!

The best story i have ever read. i look forward to a lot more.

Hotttttttt!

Please keep writing more chapters. My puss is drenched after reading this.

Terrific

Can't wait to read about the others joining them. Love the stories and hope you keep them cumming! (PS: Use an editor!)

awsome

Your stories are so fucking hot i can't wait for Erica and your dads friend to join. keep them cumming. i cummed just reading your stories.

NEED MORE!

Can't wait to read the next installment with Erica and whatever Dad has up his sleeve!

The story gets drawn out in places, but generally keeps me very wet -

so much reality

you write with so muuch realism i feel you have been there as i have .your words bring back so many loving memories for me it is a kindness you do for me .sadly my time has passed but not with out leaving a love for my stepdaughter that can never be erased and you my sweet have reminded me of those days ---thankyou so much --- ps please continue your writing

Reality

I remember something like this really happening.

Creamy

I felt like I was there,an observer. I really got into the chapters of this story. I've actually read this series,but it's been a few yrs,and I've come upon it again by chance.
I grinned,I laughed,I even got embarassed for Kay. I didn't touch myself,but my vagina just got wetter until it was just so creamy. You make it so personal,like this is about you and not just a fictional story. Bravo! I am looking forward to more chapters. If you have fully finished writing this for this site,have you made it into a novel? If so,I would definitely buy it.

mmmm-mmm-mmm

Please write some more I am eagerly awaiting what happens when they bring other playmates in on the action. These stories make me so wet.

MORE

Please write more. I want to read more.

Absolutely Brilliant

This is by far the best series I have read. It just has all the right things. I will be severely disappointed if you do not continue this. I would like to read about the father sleeping with the two girls, and the daughter sleeping with the two guys.

Anyway, it really was a great series. Nice job, and keep it up.

Can't wait till the next installment

Very well written, erotic and very realistic.

I could almost imagine being in the scene it was so well described. Please write the next chapter soon.

Incredible

I MUST HAVE MORE. This is very well written and nearing addictive.

A Most Memorable feeling

thats Incredible but you should know the withdrew is one word not two you had with drew not withdrew so try using an editor or a spell checker it will help with your response points.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga

More this is good stuff!

very well written, thanks.

Joy in the beauty of fucking Kay.....

Dear Kay, These stories of yours are so wonderful! Do not worry about comments advising you on your spelling and grammar. These can vary from person to person and always have done. What is so great here is your telling of actuality, reality, truth, and you achieve these with total honesty and freshness. As a result we can be there with you and Erica, not to mention your Dad! And the sharing of the experience with you is so truly thrilling! I loved the detail, your spontaneous images, and, above all, your lovely-dirty talking!Male or female, we all want to fuck you, and then fuck you again and again! Would you like me to go on? I should love to!

cum so hard

Loved your story...I got off three or four times whiles reading and I was so wet and horny by the time I finished...got my vibrator out and fucked my horny cunt once moree.

that was great!!

that was great. i cant wait till the next one comes out. i read all four chapters in one night. i was soooo into it i was sad to not have more to read. keep writing honey. it makes me feel like im right in the story!!

luv it

brought me to the point of learning about me own daughter, after 18 plus yrs, whom has blosmed into a bright young lady, with lots of lust.

AMAZZING

O MY GOD. I came soooo many times i could barely walk, you are an amazzing writer. dont listen to the idiots with the spelling,THEY ARE JEALOUS YOU ARE A BETTER WRITER THEN THEM.

Wow.

Great story, loved the build up.

amazing!

that was amazing, read all four of them and couldn't stop.
it shows the the care that the father has for his daughter, beautiful.
love to read the next chapters about their partner changes, and hear something about the mom.
you did great.

wow

i loved all 4 parts please write more about them

Good Job

I thought the series was very well done. Not too drawn out but very sensual. Look forward to more!

fuckyeah

this is amazing, i fingered until my boyfriend came home, and i tackled him and he fucked my brains out. yes please write more.. you are very talented. i loveeed this!

oooo fuck yea

Please continue this is one of the best stories i've ever read would love to read more thx

OHHHH

FUCK ME, please continue, as i have dreamt about fucking my dad for years. & would love to fuck my dad and best friend at the same time, i would also love to take any off his friends and please them. Man her mum, wouldnt mind getting with her and some of her men as well!! This story had me fingering myself the whole time, i dont know how many times i came, but man write more! Oh get her friend in on it, then get her with her dad and a few of his friends... and then let her mum walk in on them and join in. Then let her, her mum, dad, and Erika to all fuck together....!!!

Wow

Out of everything i have read, ur series is the absolute best i felt all of dads teasing and the lust and want, please continue this and more stories, u r AMAZING.

Are you kidding me? Am I missing the next chapter?

I need to read about daddy's little girl letting daddy and his friend play with her little pussy simultaneously.... rubbing her cunt with open palms and sliding their fingers from the bottom of her slit, slowly, up to the top and just barely touching her clit, enough to make her tight little body flinch and then relax again as they tug their fingers back down and repeat this erotic cycle... occassionally dipping one of their thick fingers inside her snug pussy and rotating it around making what I like to call 'fuck noises' ... the pretty little suction or vacuum sound as they slowly pull out of her so tight cunt that it starts to pull inside out with the stretching of her snatch. I want them to make her cunt sore with their finger fucking... working their way into taking turns fisting her as the other gently rubs her swollen nub as they whisper praises to her about being a 'good little girl' ... and 'that's it honey, I know it hurts but just a little more pushing and he's all the way in... all five fingers and soon he'll be buried up to his wrist... yeah, baby, that's a good little sweet cunt.... just relax and let him in.... " I want to read about them fingering her all night. Then, bringing Erica over and having them lick and play with each others pussy will be a nice finish... making Erica kiss her sore, swollen cunt until it feels better... yeah. Oh, fuck, I need fingered. All because of your stories. Thank you.

More please!!

Wonderfully written..
More please.. and do I need to go back to read the intro? is any of this real?

omg

i came so hard from this >.< your amazing

absolutely beautiful

Its a shame you never continued this you left all the doors open just never walked through. I'd love to hear about her and Erica tag teaming dad etc

Yes please continue and write chapter 5 and 6. I want to read about Kat and Erica with her dad and her dad sharing her with another man.

thinking what to do

I liked the stories all the 4 thought could do more cause you mention the parents kids and bad kids seems like you could make 2 or 3 longer stories added on to were your at

If you want any more feedback message me ariesdarkmage2

i got two words for ya.

MORE PLEASE!!!

when you gonna let him get Erica for real?

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So, where is chapter 4?