48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 28: Julie

Entertaining

Again, very entertaining, thank you!

Good Chapter

A good enjoyable chapter, expands the story without getting too bogged down. Also the mystery of Harry Brown is an interesting addition. Finally it was nice to see Julie coupled up with a more experienced slave and how the two worked together.

On the flip side chapter 64 was better than 65, sadly 65 felt a little rushed in places and is used to skip the plot forward a relatively large amount of time that maybe could have be better spent reacquainting her with her master who we've seen little of since the sex the chapter after the auction. Chapter 65 also doesn't feel like it adds much other than giving Julie someone experienced to work with as we've seen the intformation racket before.

Still a very enjoyable chapter and I hope you keep up the good work.

p.s. Harry Brown is probably a member of an international taskforce to end slavery, ingratiated into the opera because of its attachment to major slave holders (or maybe a corporate spy)

Quite boring. 2 stars

Infuriated Anonymous

"At first I was afraid,
I was petrified..."

Well, I was a bit horrified at first that Julie would give away The Enterprises property - ie herself - so easily. But it does show Harry up as a know nothing as well as a boor. A gentleman would ask before helping himself to the caviar. Wouldn't he? Martin makes this point later on. I was thinking that this underlines again the contradictions inherent in having a boss who is a slave or vice versa. However...

Possibly this relates to my thoughts about what Harry is to be. My theory, which is mine, is that he may be either a reporter, or some kind of police agent, investigating rumours of slavery. If so he has now established that Julie is, or believes herself to be, a slave. If she had told him to fuck off and made a note in his personal file, then that would be the end of that plot line. He can now press on to get more details of how many slaves there are, who is holding them, how they are taken and so forth. Interesting thought, how would Julie respond to the possibility of freedom? Of course I may be barking up the wrong tree altogether.

Sally, where did she come from? I'm a pretty visual person, so I like to have a clue to their appearance of the characters I read about. One of the former French colonies, even confining that category to Africa, could be anywhere between pale café au lait and espresso. I had a girlfriend called Sally, many years ago, within that range, so her face popped into my mind straight away. I wonder if she is from the "discreet Social Service", or belongs to The Enterprises and will we meet her again?

This episode the sex is terrific, so no complaints there. The way Julie and Sally engineer a double orgasm for themselves, is great and also slightly subversive! They get what they want as well as giving what they must. Five stars from me!

PS I see another anonymous has predicted the anti slavery thing for Harry.

More Good Stuff!

Yep, no drop in quality! Good erotic smooth writing..easy on the eye, and quite arousing..nice...thank you!

Great

I'm becoming an addict !
I think Brown has been imposed to the former opera slave boss by another organisation that manages another entertainment companies. Firing him could lead to a kind of war between that organisation and Julie's master one.

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Ready for the next episode re Julie

Harry Brown could be a secret slave trader looking to abduct trained slaves to sell at high profits in a remote location.