All Comments on 'The Switcharoo'

by Shorthairdontcare

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
not bad

this is a good story, not sure I would drive over 2 hours one way for it, but that is just me through, but still a good story

CliterateDykeCliterateDykeover 7 years ago

Beautifully written. The intensity of emotions are palpable in your story. It's so nicely characterized, I like them both but your primary character is endearing, emotional & vulnerable. I love the quirks, the silliness, the humanity here, it's so realistic, something I can relate to & laugh along at times. Delightful short vignette.

ShorthairdontcareShorthairdontcareover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you Cliterate Dyke

All of my stories revolve around the same two people. Me, the main and my lover. They are all real life stories :)

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 7 years ago

Loved it 💜

(Just proofread a little better)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I ❤️

Oh! Sexy!!! I wish I had you!!! Oh wait! I do...

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