I always ask this question: If that was what all of them want and had agreed on, if all were adults and knew what were doing, and that wouldn't affect their lives, "Why the need to get drunk and drugged"? If they stayed sobber and with all their senses working wouldn't they have a lot more pleasure and appreciated it all even more? 2*
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Anonymous08/13/16
good sex
Thanks for a hot sex story.Love MFM stories.
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Anonymous08/13/16
1*
illiterate cuck shit.
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Anonymous08/13/16
Why?
If you anti-cucks are so critical of these types of stories, then pray tell why are you reading them?
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Anonymous08/13/16
anon and impo strike again
Sad, pathetic losers. Ignore them. Your story is very hot. 5*.
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Anonymous08/13/16
I liked it
Reminded me of the time my own wife asked me what I thought of the idea of a male friend staying over. When I mentioned we only had one bedroom she just grinned and shrugged.
So I asked her how we were o go about suggesting the idea, she just smiled and said, "Watch this!" She went in the living room, came back holding his hand. Of course she was naked by then.
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Anonymous08/13/16
Here's why.
1. They are posted to be read by whoever has the interest.
2. You can't tell a story is a total piece of shit until you have read the entire story. Some authors are very clever at sucking you into what is an obvious plot, only to turn it around and make it something entirely different, and better. That didn't happen here.
3. We don't invite authors to write stories. Authors invite us to read and comment on their stories. So we do. What the fuck don't you understand?
4. Are you the fucking comment police? If some dumb shit wants to make some dumb shit comment, like this one, then let that pathetic asshole display his total ignorance and lack of intelligence. After all, those assholes have been doing it for you for years.
5. You're welcome.
To @gordo12...I agree 100% with "a lot of boundaries disappear when you're drinking", but how can it be "much more fun" if most times when a person wakes up and doesn't even remember what happened? That's why I always ask that question in cases like the one in this story...
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Anonymous08/14/16
great story
Thats about the way it happened with my wife and bud.
Dont be put off by dickheads on a free site who thing the only story tellers should be high class professional authors.
5
Welcome Leiza350. Pleased to see a new author. The flow of the story is good, but it need not be so short. The writing skill makes this easy to read. Thanks! Readers too often find stories with clumsy writing and distracted thoughts of the author. The topic of Loving Wives, from the viewpoint of the wife, is underrepresented and perhaps you will continue. The challenge is to get away from the basic narrative relating a sequence of events and develop the characters, add some uncertainty in the people and the plot. Writing conversation is difficult but gets the reader into the head of characters. This was a really nice start. Please feel encouraged!
English
Steve Was One Lucky Bastard***
Or he had the best smoke in town. Thanks for sharing
Pathetic story telling
Unbelievable and I don't mean in a good way.
And "all ways" and "always" have very different meanings. You use the wrong one.
I always ask this question...
I always ask this question: If that was what all of them want and had agreed on, if all were adults and knew what were doing, and that wouldn't affect their lives, "Why the need to get drunk and drugged"? If they stayed sobber and with all their senses working wouldn't they have a lot more pleasure and appreciated it all even more? 2*
good sex
Thanks for a hot sex story.Love MFM stories.
1*
illiterate cuck shit.
Why?
If you anti-cucks are so critical of these types of stories, then pray tell why are you reading them?
anon and impo strike again
Sad, pathetic losers. Ignore them. Your story is very hot. 5*.
I liked it
Reminded me of the time my own wife asked me what I thought of the idea of a male friend staying over. When I mentioned we only had one bedroom she just grinned and shrugged.
So I asked her how we were o go about suggesting the idea, she just smiled and said, "Watch this!" She went in the living room, came back holding his hand. Of course she was naked by then.
Here's why.
1. They are posted to be read by whoever has the interest.
2. You can't tell a story is a total piece of shit until you have read the entire story. Some authors are very clever at sucking you into what is an obvious plot, only to turn it around and make it something entirely different, and better. That didn't happen here.
3. We don't invite authors to write stories. Authors invite us to read and comment on their stories. So we do. What the fuck don't you understand?
4. Are you the fucking comment police? If some dumb shit wants to make some dumb shit comment, like this one, then let that pathetic asshole display his total ignorance and lack of intelligence. After all, those assholes have been doing it for you for years.
5. You're welcome.
Very nice.
More, please!
Sorry Impo
But a lot of boundaries disappear when you're drinking.
It's much more fun!
That said, this wasn't very good. 1*
To @gordo12...
To @gordo12...I agree 100% with "a lot of boundaries disappear when you're drinking", but how can it be "much more fun" if most times when a person wakes up and doesn't even remember what happened? That's why I always ask that question in cases like the one in this story...
great story
Thats about the way it happened with my wife and bud.
Dont be put off by dickheads on a free site who thing the only story tellers should be high class professional authors.
5
Love husbands that share
Great husband Xoxoxox Annette
At last something fun to read
Well done, more please. Five stars!
Good story
Liked your story a lot, let us hear more about some of the other meetings
Encouraged
Welcome Leiza350. Pleased to see a new author. The flow of the story is good, but it need not be so short. The writing skill makes this easy to read. Thanks! Readers too often find stories with clumsy writing and distracted thoughts of the author. The topic of Loving Wives, from the viewpoint of the wife, is underrepresented and perhaps you will continue. The challenge is to get away from the basic narrative relating a sequence of events and develop the characters, add some uncertainty in the people and the plot. Writing conversation is difficult but gets the reader into the head of characters. This was a really nice start. Please feel encouraged!
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