All Comments on 'The Girl I Wasn't'

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 5 years ago

Very dark but artful and imaginative. A survivor always has something dead inside.

Senna JawaSenna Jawaover 5 years ago
A very difficult theme

This is dramatic and extremely depressing.

If an analysis of the poem is needed then the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum (at Literotica) may be preferable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Way to go Girl

I was worried that she was going to die. I am so happy that she lives to fuck another day.

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 3 years ago

I can't comment. So sad, tragic. Crimes against women, against girls, against children . A modern tragedy.

What is wrong with love.

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