Painfully Shy Ch. 02

Excellent second chapter, well written, although a bit on the short side.

Too short.

Can't wait for the next one.

Very nice story.

Very nice. Keep it up.

Fantastic!!!

Loved you story. Had arranged a similar event like your, but it turned into a flop. But, it did turn my wife on tremendously. We went home and had great sex! I exposed my soul to her and she used it against me. Be careful how open you get with your spouse!

Good start, more

Excellent two chapters. Looking forward to your next installment. xoxoxoxo Annette

Still a good story, about wife and husband being in tune...

Still a good story, about wife and husband being in tune...But this part has a lot of "Maybe"s and I don't think that with some of those are a danger for that tune and for their married life (the biggest being the power over him she is feeling and liking each time more)...However still 3*

Loved it.

This is the hottest erotic story I've read in a long, long while. I would love to see my Susan experiencing this type of situation. I'm eagerly awaiting part 3 and beyond. Excellent writing.

Fantastic stories!!!!!!!!!!!1

Please, go on like this, you are a very talented writer ;-)

Short Story

It is a hot story but way too short. It is more enjoyable to read a story that is more than "wham bam thank you ma'am". Add more content to you next chapter, it would even be much more enjoyable without having to refresh my memory of what has already happened in prior chapters. It is not the only story being added daily to Literotica.

More please!

I thought this was a great follow up to the first chapter. It was interesting to read the husbands reaction to being told that the wife liked having a bigger cock - he was both jealous and turned on. I wonder if the shy wife will realise that the husband likes that and explore humiliating him more. Hope so!

well

First chapter in 1st person was great. Why did you switch in 2? From 5 to 3.

Me? Not so much. The I,plausible fantasy here, is that there was no awkwardness....

...between them the next morning, as they awoke in full and sober awareness of their evening activities. That's out of character for the characters as yo built them. Especially the wife would have had grave concerns about the night and its I,pact on their marriage....assuming, of course, she was in love oath her husband and committed. His horn-dog slavering is, sadly not too out of character for some men.
But, like too many of these class of LW stories, it was far from realistic and suffered from several important and destructive breaches of our trust.
No. Thank. You.

Painfully Dumped

If Jerry doesn't prevent the fantasies from becoming reality,he may very well find himself dumped for a guy with a massive cock! ~ Be careful what you ask for dickwad!