All Comments on 'Ex-Wife Retribution'

I really liked the concept. It left me more intrigued as to how he managed to pull it off.

Thanks for appreciating the story. I'm surprised there aren't any negative comments, yet. Maybe the 'serious' readers have given up. I'm working on a wife's revenge story, but it isn't as simple as this one.

I hope there's both a sequel and a prequel. Would love some detail of how she came to be in this situation - "the ensnarement" as it were. As well as a sequel demonstrating what becomes of our little whore wife.

I'm enthralled with your writing; but the plot seems to be free-wheeling with no conclusion to match your writing ability. I expected some spectacular twist to tie some loose ends together. Maybe I skimmed too much of it. I don't care for the butt plug stuff. I was intrigued with the whole idea, but didn't feel it all tied together. I don't have any suggestions to offer. I don't mean to be negative; just haven't thought about it enough. Great start; just not the spectacular finish I was looking for.

I just don't get it

M222RJR

Well-written, reads nicely and easily ... but I struggle with the purpose plot. What does the author want to tell us?

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that Phyllis has a mind control program running that turns her into jade and makes her a whore for her ex hubby. I gather that the new rich hubby Reginald will find himself divorced and she'll either remarry Robert or just give him whatever she gets from Reginald.

Yes, agree with the 'amazed and confused' comment.

As its reads so well, I wonder if it is a thing - to have an ambiguous ending?

Maybe to offer a first quick fun narrative flow part and then leave something irritating plot twist aftertaste behind to trigger some thinking? ... Just wondering ;-))

This is actually quite brilliantly set-up. Well donne!

That made no sense at all.