Please note that in the paragraph below, it's supposed to be Henry who's protested everything. Not Christopher. Sorry about the error:
"Probably squandering his inheritance or getting arrested in some third world country for protesting...who knows with Christopher, he's the sort to protest anything, really. Flies dying, rich people...you name it, my bother has protested against it. I can definitely attest that he is the far more interesting brother; so interesting, in fact, that he's only a few scandals away from being the official black sheep of the family. And yes, the pun was fully intended."
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So far so good...
I'm really curious as to what will happen now...
You have my attention...
Let's see how this plays out. I like your attention to detail and how the characters were introduced.
now carry on
What a good start to a story. lets have chapter two soon please.
Enjoyed this very much.
That's a great opening chapter, as others have noted, lovely attention to detail. I'll be waiting eagerly to see where this goes next.
*gasp!*
:O |my reaction after finding who Linc was. i'm very intrigued by this tale.cant wait for more!
Hi......great 1st chapter......cant wait for you to finish it....GOOD LUCK
Nice writing
Love your story telling style.
Much love. Thanks to everyone.
Please note that in the paragraph below, it's supposed to be Henry who's protested everything. Not Christopher. Sorry about the error:
"Probably squandering his inheritance or getting arrested in some third world country for protesting...who knows with Christopher, he's the sort to protest anything, really. Flies dying, rich people...you name it, my bother has protested against it. I can definitely attest that he is the far more interesting brother; so interesting, in fact, that he's only a few scandals away from being the official black sheep of the family. And yes, the pun was fully intended."
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