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Good story
Nicely written, nice lead up, nice finish by a very bad man and his very willing partner. I wish I'd thought of it first. My writing is a bit more crude and more to the point. I like your style. More please.
one
of your better stories
Very funny!
I enjoyed this story immensely.
Different style, in a very succulent way
Make a series out of this one? Loved the styling more than anything, and the story was intriguing
Very nice, but...
It was very well written but lmao like...keep your little tips in the parentheses to yourself. Please. As a woman, nothing is a bigger turn off than reading something that generalizes her gender. Otherwise, wow, awesome story. I loved the tone and your writing style is very promising.
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'keep your little tips in the parentheses to yourself.'
These are not tips so much as an indication of how the man's mind works.
Some people do think that way.
Ohhhhhh....
I enjoyed this very much.
just the tip
I loved your little tips - always fun to read how the guys' mind is processing the action. You wrote a delicious story, thank you for sharing.
I love this!
Witty, fun, clever, insightful, brilliantly worded prose, and you played on some of my deepest fantasies. Please, keep writing. You have such a skill. I earnestly look forward to reading more. :)
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