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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/20/16

Rough

@ other anonymous, we get it, not your fetish, chill out.

This story is ok at best, a little rough writing, and pretty short. It's a nice idea for a story, but you need a lot more to keep people interested.

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by Anonymous08/20/16

then don't read chastity stories!!

Great idea. Agreed a bit longer would be nice but great job!

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by DanLockered08/22/16

I love the comments especially the angry ones by the anonymous Mr Angries. Keep them coming. I love them.

Just a quick note... it's fiction. In fiction anything can happen. Dragons can exist. Someone could turn water into gold.

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by Anonymous08/22/16

Keep writing

I like it, short and sweet. Please shrink some more penises!

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