Nice short read. 5 Stars. More than a teenage fantasy,,,a granny fantasy.
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Anonymous08/30/16
Re: "I don't believe a word of it"
That's why most fiction writing is called 'fiction'. Duh But I suspect that you are indicating that your 'disbelief' wasn't 'suspended' enough. IMO, fantasy fiction can be as interesting as, and is often more interesting than, so-called 'true-to-life' or 'real life' stories. And even so-called 'real life' stories are often told in a highly subjective way, depending on what elements are included or left out of the narrative, and the adjectives used to describe or label events and situations.
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Anonymous08/30/16
It's Porn not an English Class Essay
Who cares about one wrong word. So "resided" was used instead of "receded". Did that really diminish the visual impact in your mind's eye of the sex and the excitement of the story as it played out? Good job ntrance. Nice build up and realistic sex. I give you 5 strokes...:-).
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Anonymous08/30/16
re: Unbelievable...
What did you expect from such a cliche, trite, banal, unoriginal title? Just look at the URL. The 35 at the end indicates this is the 35th story with the same title.
I have to admit; I'm a sucker for threesome stories. Must be something in my past. Anyway ~ this was a great story, sounds probable (which gives it an authentic feel) and it made me happy. It's a bit MORE kinky than 3; which turned out to be a Redeeming Quality. Thanks for the entertainment !
English
Unbelievable...
... as in, I don't believe a word of it.
Teenage fantasy.
"Alice toyed with and sucked on each of us as our erections resided."
Resided? WTF are you trying to say?
Hot
Nice short read. 5 Stars. More than a teenage fantasy,,,a granny fantasy.
Re: "I don't believe a word of it"
That's why most fiction writing is called 'fiction'. Duh But I suspect that you are indicating that your 'disbelief' wasn't 'suspended' enough. IMO, fantasy fiction can be as interesting as, and is often more interesting than, so-called 'true-to-life' or 'real life' stories. And even so-called 'real life' stories are often told in a highly subjective way, depending on what elements are included or left out of the narrative, and the adjectives used to describe or label events and situations.
It's Porn not an English Class Essay
Who cares about one wrong word. So "resided" was used instead of "receded". Did that really diminish the visual impact in your mind's eye of the sex and the excitement of the story as it played out? Good job ntrance. Nice build up and realistic sex. I give you 5 strokes...:-).
re: Unbelievable...
What did you expect from such a cliche, trite, banal, unoriginal title? Just look at the URL. The 35 at the end indicates this is the 35th story with the same title.
One Step ABOVE a Threesome !
I have to admit; I'm a sucker for threesome stories. Must be something in my past. Anyway ~ this was a great story, sounds probable (which gives it an authentic feel) and it made me happy. It's a bit MORE kinky than 3; which turned out to be a Redeeming Quality. Thanks for the entertainment !
Ron
Love the story
Go girl, take control and rule. Love strip poker. Xoxoxoxo Annette
Can't Wait...
Can't wait to hear about Alice's xxxploits with her husband's softball team!
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