As I'm sure you'll hear in every comment, let me be the first to point out that this is in the wrong category. They are not related so there's no incest. This should have been in the Mature category.
As to the story, it was OK. It would have been better if there had been more sex and fewer descriptions of just how massive her tits were. We get it. They're huge. By the way, on tits that big, nipples the size of pencil erasers are pretty tiny. Three stars.
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Anonymous08/18/16
well-writtten of course, but come on,
for a kid like Sean the best cougar of all has got to be his own mom. If he thinks that Lorna's cunt felt great on his young cock, wait till he feels the cunt he came out of.
While I appreciate the feedback on my story, I must say that ALL of you who complaind about it being in the "wrong category" need to remember that the category is not only "Incest" but "Taboo." In any society in which we live, the seduction by a MILF of a young man is certainly taboo; hence its inclusion into this category. I placed it in the category I felt it best fit, and the moderators thought the same or else they'd have changed it. On the other hand, if this is the only complaint with the story then I'm good with it.
There will be no Part 2 to this story as each installment of "The Cougar Chronicles" is a one-shot deal with each main character.
And "EpiphanyJones," you must not have ever heard of Linsey Dawn McKenzie if you think HH breasts are only in cartoons. At her largest she was a size 36HHH and there are pictures to prove it.
Sex4lf57, I can show you several pictures of several very well endowed young ladies whose humungous tits also have equally humungous nipples. But that's not the point; the point is that this is a story of FICTION which allows me to take liberties with facts. If you or anyone else can't get next to that or my fascination with extremely large breasts, then I suggest you not read any more of my stories.
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Anonymous08/19/16
Answer to the Bitchers‼
The whole premise of Literotica is FANTASY❗Suck it up, TITTY-BABIES😠
Don't get me wrong about my comments about your cougar's tits. I have a huge fascination with big boobs. My Mom had them, my wife has them and every fantasy I have has them. I'm right there with you brother! I was just suggesting that the story would have been better if there been more written about fucking and less about her tits. Just some constructive criticism.
Why not place the story in Mature or one of the many other cats more suited to your story, rather than arrogantly trying to justify it simply by using the word "taboo" with no grasp of the concept, definition or the history of the term.
With all due respect, every thing in literotica, is by its very nature taboo!
So then do you think that all of the stories should be placed in the Incest/Taboo cat?
If you are inconsiderate enough to still wish to place your "work" in this cat, then please at the very least, clearly mention in the title that the story has no incest related content.
If the only critical thing you have to say about the story is that it's in the wrong category, then I'm not overly concerned.
But "inconsiderate" by placing it in that category? Really? How about my opinion on what category it belongs in is just different from yours? I'll be the first to admit that yes, it would fit in the "Mature" category as well, and when I post the other installments of this series that's where they'll go. But "inconsiderate?" Hardly.
As for your comment about "everything here being taboo," I beg to differ. Sex between consenting adults isn't taboo; sex between husband and wives isn't taboo (as long as it's your husband or your wife); seducing someone of your own age isn't taboo, and in this day and age neither is seducing someone your age of the same sex. You might want to reconsider that "everything here is taboo" statement.
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As I'm sure you'll hear in every comment, let me be the first to point out that this is in the wrong category. They are not related so there's no incest. This should have been in the Mature category.
As to the story, it was OK. It would have been better if there had been more sex and fewer descriptions of just how massive her tits were. We get it. They're huge. By the way, on tits that big, nipples the size of pencil erasers are pretty tiny. Three stars.
well-writtten of course, but come on,
for a kid like Sean the best cougar of all has got to be his own mom. If he thinks that Lorna's cunt felt great on his young cock, wait till he feels the cunt he came out of.
Excellent
Great story. Would love to see part 2 of this one! Looking forward to more.
Wrong category, but you lost "me" when I read "HH breasts".
There should be a special category, "Existing Only In Cartoons & The Minds Of Adolescent Boys Still Waiting To Actually Touch A Boob".
While I appreciate the feedback on my story, I must say that ALL of you who complaind about it being in the "wrong category" need to remember that the category is not only "Incest" but "Taboo." In any society in which we live, the seduction by a MILF of a young man is certainly taboo; hence its inclusion into this category. I placed it in the category I felt it best fit, and the moderators thought the same or else they'd have changed it. On the other hand, if this is the only complaint with the story then I'm good with it.
There will be no Part 2 to this story as each installment of "The Cougar Chronicles" is a one-shot deal with each main character.
And "EpiphanyJones," you must not have ever heard of Linsey Dawn McKenzie if you think HH breasts are only in cartoons. At her largest she was a size 36HHH and there are pictures to prove it.
Sex4lf57, I can show you several pictures of several very well endowed young ladies whose humungous tits also have equally humungous nipples. But that's not the point; the point is that this is a story of FICTION which allows me to take liberties with facts. If you or anyone else can't get next to that or my fascination with extremely large breasts, then I suggest you not read any more of my stories.
Answer to the Bitchers‼
The whole premise of Literotica is FANTASY❗Suck it up, TITTY-BABIES😠
Re titty size
Don't get me wrong about my comments about your cougar's tits. I have a huge fascination with big boobs. My Mom had them, my wife has them and every fantasy I have has them. I'm right there with you brother! I was just suggesting that the story would have been better if there been more written about fucking and less about her tits. Just some constructive criticism.
But it IS the wrong category!
But it IS the wrong category!
Why not place the story in Mature or one of the many other cats more suited to your story, rather than arrogantly trying to justify it simply by using the word "taboo" with no grasp of the concept, definition or the history of the term.
With all due respect, every thing in literotica, is by its very nature taboo!
So then do you think that all of the stories should be placed in the Incest/Taboo cat?
If you are inconsiderate enough to still wish to place your "work" in this cat, then please at the very least, clearly mention in the title that the story has no incest related content.
To letmein90202
If the only critical thing you have to say about the story is that it's in the wrong category, then I'm not overly concerned.
But "inconsiderate" by placing it in that category? Really? How about my opinion on what category it belongs in is just different from yours? I'll be the first to admit that yes, it would fit in the "Mature" category as well, and when I post the other installments of this series that's where they'll go. But "inconsiderate?" Hardly.
As for your comment about "everything here being taboo," I beg to differ. Sex between consenting adults isn't taboo; sex between husband and wives isn't taboo (as long as it's your husband or your wife); seducing someone of your own age isn't taboo, and in this day and age neither is seducing someone your age of the same sex. You might want to reconsider that "everything here is taboo" statement.
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