Storm World Ch. 01

YASSSSS!!!!!!

Spend enough time alone and any contact is good contact.

Holy shit! This is out!

I read UaSS way back in 2015 and became an immediate fan. Was eagerly waiting for this since I saw your profile update earlier this year.

I'll hold off from reading this though until all the chapters are up. I loved UaSS especially because I read it all in one sitting and I want to do the same in SW.

I expect you're pretty much done writing the story and I hope you'll upload all the chapters as soon as possible.

Preemptive 5*s since that's what fanbois do.

Good to See

I thoroughly enjoyed UaSS so look forward to reading your next story

I absolutely loved UaSS!!!!

I am so excited to read this one!!!

Your writing

Havent even read the story yet but cant say how much I appreciate you writing more. Savage shore has been my all time favorite story on this or any other site.

Welcome back

Glad to see ya writing

Thank you.

Dear RipperFish, I am absolutely thrilled to see that you are back here.
UaSS is still one of my favorite stories and to be able to read even more from you is much appreciated.
This story is has a nice flow to it, and promises to be very exciting.
I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

Sincerely,
Mollgan

YES!!...

you're back and life is good again.

Nice

Oh boy, the new human guy seems to have been by himself a little TOO long

YOUR BACK!!

Great start of a new story, looking forward to more!!!

looking forword to the new story

loved the first story and was sad that it was the only story on the site wish you would tell us if you have other stories on other sites and what name you use. I like your story lines and would look for your other works

Outstanding!

Welcome back RipperFish. You have been missed.

love that you are back

i looked all over for you. glad you are with us.

Just slightly confused

It feels like a lifetime since you finished Savage Shore so the distinction between groups wasn't fresh in my memory maybe some type of preface would help especially for the new readers
If you are a new reader go read his first story now.

Awesome. Welcome back

And back with a crash! Love the pace.

Oh thank god

Yes yes yes i have been waiting for you to publish something else you are one of my favorite authors on this site thank you for writing something angain

a suggestion

A sort of glossary in your bio for what the different types of jZav'Etch and things like the taq'a would help.

Not that re-reading UaSS would be a great hardship.

Thank you for another 5 star story.

SWEET

Im so glad your back i loved the first chapter and im in no rush so take your time lol

YeeeeHawwww!!!

Blackened Ripperfish, just like mother used to make when she was drunk! Even better is knowing you're addicted to your universe. You done good, thanks for bringing another tale to life.

Fantastic

So glad you're back with another tail! Hehehe Enjoyed the opening scene very much. I'll have to reread it and create a cheat sheet until I can keep every character straight in my head. Your descriptions are so well done that I was immediately drawn right in to the scene. Tip of the hat to you sir.

Fangirl Screaming

YES! He is back! He is back! Savage Shore was excellent and I'm so excited that RipperFish has decided to expand the universe/continue the story. (To be honest I haven't even read the chapter first, I was so excited I posted here, now if you will excuse me I'm going to go read this anticipated chapter.)

Thanks mate!

I am so happy to see you back as an Author!

Alright!!!!

Now this is fun. RF is back and writing as well as always. Cannot wait for more but sure enjoyed the opening story.

Nice to see you start another story

So....he's lonely. Ok. Where did the human come from again?

Nice start!

groan and creak :)

welcome back

thank you well wrote in your first story cant wait for more of this new one

YAY

well like everybody else im very excited to have yo back and eagerly await the story as you write it and now for my comment on this chapter:

Ben: "my names Benjamin... Benjamin what?"
me: Benjamin Gunn is that you?? wheres Jim?? and Long john? will they be along shortly?

Very Glad you started writing again. I was disappointed when you finished UaSS. That was a very well written story, although i kept wondering where that disk came from though. I had always hoped that you would write more. Thank you for doing more. Keep up the great work.

WELCOME

haven't read a decent story here since Liam and his wives left,welcome back

Welcome back...

It's so good to see you back. I'm looking forward to the great ride ahead.

Welcome Back

Sorry I didn't get that in first. Take your time and thank you in advance. Can't wait to read this and the other stories yet to be written.

Cheers Rudi

*totally unmanly SQUEE of joy*

'Nuff said.

Outstanding

Stumbled on Storm World yesterday and ended up rereading Upon a Savage Shore. It was even more enjoyable than the first time and also sets up the scene for Storm World. Well worth reading it first if you haven't already.
Stories don't usually raise my adrenaline level, but so far this one sure has.
Glad to see you back, and now I'll start chewing on my fingernails waiting for the next chapter.

Damn Glad

Damn glad to see you back, with the promise of even more to come. Was a bit of a dry spell after you finished "Upon A Savage Shore" as only a few write this type of storyline and getting to be fewer.
Any ways glad your back and best of luck with future chapters and stories.

Welcome Back

Glad to see you're back in the saddle! Its always great to come back to this website and see new content, especially when it's as good as yours. Your world building is top notch, and the characters are ones that we the readers can grow with. It will be awesome to see how this series turns out!

1 year 10 months

Holy smokes! I had about given up on you. Your name is at the top of my favorite authors list. I have read your first story about 6 times. I have imagined many scenarios and often thought of continuing it somehow. But, every time I seriously considered it, I figured I wouldn't be able to do it justice. Besides, Literotica won't let just anybody continue someone else's work. Welcome back and keep 'em coming.

Excellent sci-fi.

Yes!

Ripperfish is writing again. Good stuff! Thanks for your time and efforts.

Scared

I was afraid that you would only write the one story. Your writing is at the top of anything ever posted here.

good to have you back

my only grieve is the (alien) names.
it is a bit hard to remember who is who (well at least in comparison to only 3)

HAHAHA great to see you again

I was just curious to see if you'd ever updated on anything, to my shock you had 3 chapters up!
Great work as ever
JC

happy

to see more stories keep them coming

paps

great to see you back. Storm World looks to be every bit as good as Upon a Savage Shore.

Loove where this is coming from

Thank you so much for sharing your story's again. I'm a big fan of your first installment.
Best of luck to you and yours.

Glad to see you're Backl

Finished Last series today, Glad we have a Next 1

THANK YOU!

Missed your postings, as I rate you among the very best of the writers. Please continue to enrich our lives by allowing us to enjoin your well written Sci-Fi literature.

Just came across this story; what a pleasant surprise!

back

bit strange to read about the same races but our fav characters are absent. i'm sure it'll be good.
p.s. i just finished UASS in one go yest, so it's quite fresh!

Ben

Ben reminds me of Tom Hanks and Wilson the coconut.

Woohooo!

So glad you are back!
Onward :D
Jason