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oh my goodness...
This is better than good. I want to take this poem out on a date and get to know it better! Original, well written, just fabulous. I just read Ange's caramel suite and I was feeling totally envious and now I read this. I just can't stand it! I'm going to write something incredible right now!
You reached me...
...in your poem that seems determined to exist and how your spirit spills out and escapes. Excellent.
Swapping inspiration...
for a wonderful poem...
jim : )
"singing rat animatronic cardboard pizza"
Did you swallow a Hale pill?
A very good poem.
A fun read.
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