All Comments on 'Making Up'

by Ed0613

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Mushy but nice

I love happy endings

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sex can be so beautiful!

Husband tries to make up with wife. Roses the whole bit. This story reads like the real thing and it should happen this way all the time. A sweet, tender, and deeply moving story of a couple finding their way through Loveland, in spite of little setbacks. A lovely Read!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sweet association!

Is make-up sex the answer? This story is lovely and endearing from the first paragraph leading this reader to believe that make-up sex is the finest kind.

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...