by Jenna Grey
One of the best stories I've read here. Ladies, may you all find a guy that sends you like this. Guys, appreciate, love, pay attention, and listen to know your woman so you can be this for her.
Very erotic story......if all men could be like this....
I love the public comments and the feedback I get regarding my stories. The support I get from my readers- the new ones and the faithful regulars- means so much to me! Thank you so much. - JG
You've just turned off whole the moslims and Jewish readers there. :D
Jenna,
This was a fun, slyly written, very erotic story. I loved the way you teased the reader about the woman not being a sub, and I thought at one point the story would venture too much towards domination, without the joyful intensity of beautiful, wild, primal sex with which you did end the story. At first I was a bit annoyed by your sentence fragments....but I got used to them....and the story had good pace, with the dialogue flowing with the action and moving it forward. I would love to see you take the reader even deeper under the skin of a woman with more lyrical intensity about shape, texture, feel of her orgasms.
Sappholovers
I know you've been talking to my guy -- we've done those things ....... it's so exciting! He's a devil and I adore him. I've never known such passion. Thank you for the tribute to that kind of love.
Gypsy
...you wouldn't tell about our 'adventures'...ah, well, not a problem! Incredibly enjoyable for me, as well, especially when you... *G*
Jenna, your stories never fail to amaze...awesome, wonderful, sensual, Extremely well written!
Happy Spring to you, lovely wench...
Sapphos and Gypsy, thank you for your comments! It's always a thrill to read that people enjoy my writing.
Sky- Wench, eh? heheheheh. You're as wonderful as always. Thank you. :) JG
Could you write this from a man's perspective?!?! That would be fantastic!