Interesting story. I think is the sister wake up for sex, maybe a cause of the brother stories. But, if he trow out Helen, why he named her when Kelly masturbates him? I think is many mysterious thinks to be explained in the next's chapters.
Short first chapter for this introduction, but interesting and mysterious story, please, don`t wait for a long time for the sequel!
Good job
I can't imagine that past writings have drawn criticism. The quality of story foundation, build-up, and conclusion is excellent. If I were to have a complaint, it could only be that I'm denied the opportunity to publicly vote. In the absence of that, I'll take the opportunity to register a "4.75" here.
I just have to share I thought your Author's note was the best thing I've ever read on this entire site. I burst out laughing. Merci bebe, for calling out all the tools. It was marvelous. Also, very enjoyable story.
And your writing in general. You need to stop worrying too much about what others say about your stories. Use the rating system as a guide for yourself, and also use the comments to give you a vague -at best- idea of what readers are thinking. Statistically, very, very few readers will comment, and you'll always have idiots that spew vulgar words. You don't need to take them to heart. You have some very strong fans, myself included. Keep that in mind. *Rant over*
Please keep writing and posting. Want to read more.
I've enjoyed this story so far. The dialog is a bit stiff in spots but not enough to be off-putting. I had the impression that the story takes place in the 19th or early 20th century when it was common for a man to keep a journal - just a thought. I would like to read more so please make sure "Reading His Secrets" is in the title or description so that I will recognize it. Thanks.
I like your stories! To paraphrase the words of PTBarnum, "you leave me wanting more".
I have noticed that your stories are not rated and think that is a pity for I give them full marks. You get credit for sharing them with us.
I list you among my favourite authors on this site.
thank you.
PS and to hell with narrow minded bigoted folk who lack the imagination to enjoy good erotic fiction.
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The sis wake up of sex?
Interesting story. I think is the sister wake up for sex, maybe a cause of the brother stories. But, if he trow out Helen, why he named her when Kelly masturbates him? I think is many mysterious thinks to be explained in the next's chapters.
Short first chapter for this introduction, but interesting and mysterious story, please, don`t wait for a long time for the sequel!
Good job
Continue
with additional chapters.
A very good read.
Interesting Start
Start? As in, I'd read more! A little background such as where and when would be great, but please continue.
Thanking you in advance!
Please continue
I can't imagine that past writings have drawn criticism. The quality of story foundation, build-up, and conclusion is excellent. If I were to have a complaint, it could only be that I'm denied the opportunity to publicly vote. In the absence of that, I'll take the opportunity to register a "4.75" here.
Enough to make one want to see where this goes!
Hope you write more!
Good start
I'd read more
I loved this
A very nice, slow buildup. Now you need to continue. If I could vote on this I would have given 5 stars. (btw, why can't we give it a rating?)
I just have to share I thought your Author's note was the best thing I've ever read on this entire site. I burst out laughing. Merci bebe, for calling out all the tools. It was marvelous. Also, very enjoyable story.
i need to read more please please please......
A 5 Star Story
Loved it. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks
Add me to the list of folks that want you to continue this story...
I think you have a winner, here.
Love It
And your writing in general. You need to stop worrying too much about what others say about your stories. Use the rating system as a guide for yourself, and also use the comments to give you a vague -at best- idea of what readers are thinking. Statistically, very, very few readers will comment, and you'll always have idiots that spew vulgar words. You don't need to take them to heart. You have some very strong fans, myself included. Keep that in mind. *Rant over*
Please keep writing and posting. Want to read more.
very nice
I liked this.
AND the final comment!
Good So Far
I've enjoyed this story so far. The dialog is a bit stiff in spots but not enough to be off-putting. I had the impression that the story takes place in the 19th or early 20th century when it was common for a man to keep a journal - just a thought. I would like to read more so please make sure "Reading His Secrets" is in the title or description so that I will recognize it. Thanks.
Good story
I really liked this story. Both the plot and character development was spot on. Keep writing.
re: Reading His Secrets
Hell yes I would like more of this story! I don't know what idiots gave you shit, but that's on them. I like your story lines and charactors.
good 1st page. but we need more. its too short to be fulfilling, it barelly scratches the surface of being erotic.
A 2nd page would've at least made it possible for sex between them. this story is just a prelude to the good stuff.
don't finish your stories before they come to a satisfying end.
I like it. .....
I like your stories! To paraphrase the words of PTBarnum, "you leave me wanting more".
I have noticed that your stories are not rated and think that is a pity for I give them full marks. You get credit for sharing them with us.
I list you among my favourite authors on this site.
thank you.
PS and to hell with narrow minded bigoted folk who lack the imagination to enjoy good erotic fiction.
just want to say after reading most of your stories, I want more. more stories from you and more chapters to your stories
How does Kelly know that the chest belongs to her brother? If she goes up into the attic and finds a random chest it could belong to anyone.
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