My Number Ch. 03

Great Combination!

I really enjoyed how you combined all the aspects of a wonderfully romantic story with a hint of an erotic quality. Now, the hard is waiting for the next chapter! Please keep on writing!

Loving this.....

Please keep cranking these out.

I see why she couldn't resist

Seeing the predator falling pray in her own game is always special, but seeing her falling in love so hard is even better! I see really bright and fun future ahead, with simple things that make each of their days.

And I love how you implemented all the ideas and wishes you readers posted last time. Those recycled lines from your other two stories fit in here perfectly and paying some homage really ties the essence.

Of course gave it a 5*!

nice one

been enjoying reading it . good story

I am so cynical

I keep waiting for the Crash. Dave seems too perfect and talented to have been a virgin. I might just be jaded but I am suspicious. I do hope I am wrong because the characters are quite endearing.

I do wonder how much conflict there will be when her number comes up.

Thank you for a sweet and wonderful story.

Re: Cynical

How is Dave too good to have been a virgin? Note that I haven't been too descriptive of actual sex, but I have tried to pay attention to the other little things lovers do, from a foot massage where he knows just how to touch a woman, to kisses which leave Marcy wanting more. You don't have to have had sex to figure out those things.

To me, being a good lover means a lot more than being good in bed. The sexiest sentence I've ever written, from another story -- one that I still need to finish! -- was:

Everyone just stopped talking for a second, looking stunned, as she said, "See you tonight, sweetheart," lightly dragging her fingertips across my shoulders, from left to right, as she walked away.

I can actually see that, in my mind's eye.

"I've been shaving her bare ever since high school, but all of a sudden I started wondering whether I wanted to change that up."

Poor Dave. She's already starting to take him for granted. Next, she'll get a super short haircut and stop exercising.

If you think not shaving her pubes . . .

. . . or getting a super-short haircut would be bad, you shouldn't click on my name to get to my other stories, and read the Morgan series! :)

Wanting...

More of this! Please continue right up to their wedding day. So many lose ends to tie up. Like her mom, slut or sex starved at home? His older sisters, did they teach him about a womans needs, but still leave him a virgin? You got a really nice story going.
Thanks for it!

Very Interesting Read****

And very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

My number

This is a great story. It's well told and leaves me hanging for the next chapter...

Really good story

I could only wish my first had been as good as Dave's. There are some hurdles to go over for the two, but they should be surmountable as they seem to be maturing together. It will be fun reading about it.

Dave

Still great

Good chapter.
I have already read some comment that indicates that my previous comment was correct, if a boy catches many girls is fine, if a girl catches many guys, then he is a whore. Very well for equal rights ..., so Anon continues, you will get what IE and Taliban want!
Sorry to politicize my comment, but I could not resist the temptation :(
5 * for the author.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.