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it seems that the passion thread is spawning some terrific poetry lately!! very glad youposted this poem Liar, I especially love the flow, it doesnt miss a beat :)

A Scandinavian Longfellow reuses a classic poem's form perfectly,

adding alliteration.

In fact the rhythmic cadence is so strong that you may have to read the poem several times just to get past the pleasure of the structure and into the meat.

A strong 5 that you should read and enjoy.

The alliteration alone :) makes this a fantastic read--but you've just worked the form beautifully and it supports the content which, imho, is the way it's 'sposed to work.