St. Clair: Soldier Girl

5 stars

I do not usually give 5 stars out unless the story is very good and this one is, I read it word for word I love the part where she puts tammi's boyfriend in his place, and Tammi was right if she had wait for TJ to make the first move then she would have waited forever, can't wait for more of Tammi and TJ

Very, very Yummy

Wow, you've started off with a fantastic first chapter to this story! I can't wait to read more! Thank you!

Aww, a nice story.

I really enjoyed reading this. Hope there's more to come of Tammi and TJ. 5 stars.

Wounded

Wonderful wounded warrior story. Can't wait for the rest of their story.
Semper Fi!

So good

I didn't understand Tammy's comment about not doing that before. What was she referring to?

FiveWolves:

Tammi is - justifiably- proud of her ability at sex. What she is saying is that she has never met her equal until now. There is a little more to this which will hopefully be cleared up in "Siren", when we get to it. Todd172

Really good story

Thanks, pal. I love stories that make me happy. Yours had a heavy load of reality and a lot of love. You've been there, plain as day.

Thoughts

"Underwear, women's, assorted" - I loved that scene!

"They also picked up the raggedy brown coup." - "coupe"

Very, very nice.

Thanks for another great story.

I may read mostly LW, but I'm damn sure going to read your stories, no matter where you post.

Another great story but that just seems to be a normal thing for you. You seem to be riding a wave of great stories and I'm glad you are taking us along with you.

5 stars, of course, and looking forward to your next story.

Thank you for writing.

So much story

So much story and depth to your characters in so few words. Profound emotional impact. I can't wait for the rest of the series. Once again, thanks.*****

St. Clair

Unless I missed it, it wasn't mentioned, but I assume "St. Clair" is the town?

sbrooks103x

All that's given here is that she got a bus ticket to Saint Clair. It's the actually the county. The town's name hasn't been given.

Tick

I enjoyed your story, it was a lovely read, and would love to read some more.....
thank you...........Nikki

Your ratings are too low

I just finished the last of your stories and can't wait for more. I think I am going to read Blue Topaz Eyes again since its been a few weeks.

I am glad you are consistently posting stories and can't believe you're not getting higher ratings. I like the ease of flow of all your stories and wish they were longer when I reached the end.

AnonWes

nice story

But the mystical call through the spheres to go save Tammi was jarring, if you don't believe in mental telepathy. Everybody was soo sweet, so accepting of her. Living in a town where never is heard a discouraging word, except for one wife beater. Would have done with a bit more conflict, and one or two disapproving people, just to balance it out a bit.

@Anonymous Re: "Ratings"

It's simple math - One 1 star rating require THREE 5 star ratings just to get to a 4 star score.

One 2 star needs 2 5 stars and a 3 needs 1.

And that's just to get a 4 star rating!

To get a score higher than four requires still MORE 5 star scores!

Lovely Romance

I love the way the small town (County?) sticks together and supports each other. TJ has had a lot of tragedy in her life. Tammi came along at just the right time, for both of them.
I am looking forward to the rest of the stories in this series.

Thanks for the Feedback

The feedback helps me make the stories better and I appreciate that. Working on the next segment "Witch", but will have to spending a bit of time on it. I am talking to some rural deputies to keep a realistic feel to it. Military stuff I know, local police a bit less.

Nice

Would love to read more about these two

Nice story.

Not a great story, but a serviceable one. And damn, son, you fucking nailed the PTSD and survivor's guilt. Will be interested to see where you take this.

Liked it!

I thought it kinda sneaked up on ya. It's a great story that I think had great pace. Once I got to the end, I certainly wanted to read more. Good Job!

Another great story...

I grew up in a small town similar to what you describe here. Everyone had a good idea where everyone else lived, even if you weren't friends with that person and had never visited them. Everyone knows the location of the trailer parks and the type of people living there, who was doing what to whom in town, who got drunk or stoned on a regular basis, and for the most part - who was probably stepping out on their spouse. It's hard to keep secrets in a small town. You describe it well.

You made me look up a new word: Limned. Fairly certain I've never even seen that word before. At first thought you'd really botched the spelling for 'lined', but ended up learning a new word. Thanks.

Great story. You keep writing and we'll keep reading. 5 stars, as always.

J

What's wrong?

Is there something wrong with your stories? Or is it me?
I like them, when I read them for the first time, I like them even more the second time around. Write some more, please, or even better, write a lot more. You can make me laugh and cry, all on the same page. Love it!

Great read

This was a really good read. I hope you come back to these characters, wiuld love to see more from them.

Only one problem with this story...

...it ended.

Please keep writing

I'll keep reading and voting "5".

Is the sequel still being worked on?

Really enjoyed, looking forward to more in the series

Yes

@Deathmage - Yes it is (Witch) -and in fact there is a prequel in the work as well (Rock in a Hard Place) - both partially written. Witch will be in Lesbian but RIAHP will likely be somewhere else. Its a part of TJ's story, but her relationship with Tammi is not the primary driver of the story, and while I generally try to keep stories together, it just doesn't seem to fit. TJ strikes pretty close to home for me, so the stories will get written.

Sorry for the delay. Been sidetracked with the a major piece of The Shack series on LW, but these are next on my list. Be warned though, some stories can suddenly decide they want to be written, so I can't guarantee timelines. I know it sounds crazy, but its the way it works for me.
Thanks,
Todd

I am in need of more of this story! I was so enraptured by the whole thing!

Please give us more

Please
Get the next chapter done so we can enjoy more of this interesting couple

Great story!

Thanks for sharing.

After Re-Reading...

I wish that I could give it six or seven stars. Your story had me crying in places. Too many people - more women than men - but not all, are trapped in "relationships" that they can't escape.

But it also made me very happy. Your people - not characters (much too real!!) - are engrossing, enthralling, enlightening. Enheartening. A couple of people have criticized you because everyone's been so nice to TJ, but I'm quite sure that, just as there is acceptance at the Sheriff's Office, there is raw hatred in the church where "Cindy" worships.

There wasn't enough time to fully flesh out this small town/county. Not yet.

I'll have to check out your other tales. I loved "Bizarre Tails, Gibbous Tentacles." It was a trip!!

And now, on to "St. Clair Ch. 02"!!!

WANDER IN A FOGGY HAZE

until you meet your own stumbling block, TK U MLJ LV NV