All Comments on 'The Grey Lady Ch. 06'
by Opensesame54321
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 7 years agoHow dare you end the chapter just like that, after making us wait for this delicious bit of literature!!! You better not take too long with the next installment, or I'll have to take to pestering you constantly.... Don't test me, I can be a real whiney pants! Please update soon!!! I must also have some more, purdy please!!!!
Anonymousover 7 years agoI want to punch you! How dare you leave at a cliffhanger like this! Stingy with the story!
Anonymousover 7 years agoPlease don't do that. Anything else. It's a total buzzkill.
Horseman68over 7 years agoWell done. Do not believe your readers will delay much at all in reading your next chapter. As for the word "penis" comment from a reader? Would observe that the word penis is used in paragraphs pertaining to Sam's words and thoughts, which is totally appropriate for a female such as herself at that time. In the paragraphs referring to Jake's words and thoughts he uses the word "cock" which is also for him appropriate. This writer is very good at her craft.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI hate cliffhanger! but adore this story keep it up.
Anonymousover 7 years agoYoure a good writer and the story is well written, but god damn Samantha is such a weak little bitch. Even if she did attempt to kill Patch, she felt guilty. Which she shouldn't have. Hopefully she develops into a truly strong noble woman. Not some petty excuse bitch like this.
Opensesame54321over 7 years agoAuthorYes, there is a Chapter 7. I've been making final corrections to it and hope to submit it either today or tomorrow. Then it will go in the queue and usually takes several days before it is accepted or rejected. I will give you a heads up if it is rejected and I have to do more revisions.
I don't plan on leaving you with an unfinished story. I'm glad that you want more. Thanks to everyone for the positive comments. And those of you who point out the things that bother you about my writing - I am taking all of that in consideration. You all help my work improve.
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