Spa Day

Great start.

I hope that there is more to cum.

boring

Where is the sex. I kept reading and waiting only to be disappointed. Hope there's more to this story.

It's a good thing that you don't allow voting. This one would rate below 3.00

Can we rate a minus score

Not worth my time reading

too harsh

Give him a break. it was a good effort. atleast he gave us a plausible reason for them to be naked.

Maybe more dialogue next time? Have your characters tell the story.

Who wouldn't be happy to have been in the spa?

The story barely held my attention. All build-up with no conclusion. And it wasn't incest OR taboo.

I do find it odd that you'll allow comments, but not voting. I'd have rated it a 2 or possible 3.

Believable for sure

I don't understand some of the comments, but to each their own. I enjoyed the short story because is came across as plausible and I could see it actually happening.

wonderful

Not really. Too many mistakes, weak buildup, NO conclusion.

I guess it was a dirty story though.

I'd have given one star.

Awful

What was the point? The character introductions were confusing or non-existent. The story was really pointless. There was no incest, and wouldn't have been with the relationships involved.