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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Shoals of laughter - a good phrase

I like the way this starts.

"Shoals of laughter,

Layered in deep blues,

dawning reds

and oh such a lovely pink"

Is "cleaven" Canadian for "cloven"? I am not familiar with it.

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