All Comments on 'An Afternoon Delight'

Nice story. I hope the young man makes it a habit of picking up older women in future stories. Like sexy women in their 40s!!

Nice that a young man knew how to satisfy a woman. 5 Stars. Hope you have more of this encounter to describe. All night and the next morning.

One complaint....too short!!!

Thanks Don

More, please. More, more, more... LOL

Serious, though, it's good shit. And the best line in the story (to me at least): "I want a better view while you get yourself off on my dick," he said.

Two thumbs up!

Loved it! Very hot!! Just wished it was longer and described the rest of the day and night. She should have sent a selfie of them in bed to her friends so they'd understand.

FUCK!!! that was great - only problem was my cock didn't get its shot of cum off before the end of the story - am I too slow to cum or was the story over too soon?????

You have certainly redeemed yourself and shown the critics what you can do. Loved the sex and the story. I guess I was a bit surprised that she was that old. I mean 30??? That's ancient. ;)

Seriously, I thought you did a fine job. I always enjoy sex described from a woman's point of view. Many guys, myself included, try to do that when, really, we don't have a clue. So, I do appreciate it when a woman shows me through her writing what it was like, especially a woman who can write well. So thanks! Hope you will keep it up and bless us with more of your writing.

BJ

Well !!!! the story is too short to enjoy the aroma of the session. Looking at ample of time and situation,,,should be more then 3 sessions. The narration is good and the

language used is also nice and gripping. Thanks.

Thank you all for all of the great feedback, I am overwhelmed. Thank you, thank you, thank you :)

This story depicts the dream of many guys. A random meeting with a hot woman that totally takes you away from your plans for the day and off to an entirely new lustful adventure. I liked it a lot. The only minor disracting flaw that I noticed was that while the male character's name was Adam, about half way through the story he was referred to as Jack.

Good scene setting and description of the sex. I enjoyed it.

So sensual. Loved it.

and Jessica had the room to herself, so I can imagine she and Adam spent the afternoon, evening, and night going at it. I wonder how many times they did it?

Good story.

Great job on this story, i loved it.

Hot hotel room sex with a virtual stranger is always a fun read!

Another great story! I'd trade hot sex with a stranger for a baseball game any day ... Especially a Cubs game ... Ha! (I'm a Cardinals fan) ... I usually have to wait till after the game to go back to the hotel for sex ... Never just skipped the game for it! Again, great story ...

Hot! Hot! Hot!

A sexy, well-written romp. Great fun to read.