Idiotic daydream by a pubescent author!!! MINUS 5*!!!
Only laughable that an adult people can write such a crap!!!
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Anonymous08/21/16
Well..
Not the best here... In fact in my opinion you had a good start. But it went down hill quickly.. Yes this game is played many times over. But a 2
by
Anonymous08/21/16
hey bubba
Thought you should know. Details about you wife's serial cheating hsve been posted on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com.
You will find out what she was-has been doing before-after the bullshit story she gave you about her friends fantasy play. You were s5et up into believing she would wait to take drugs until you got there. They meant for you to view her being gangbanged in bar
Great concept and interesting story. Unfortunately husband set himself up for a long stay in the local 'barred' shop. Better for her to enter and play without your Pharma help. You probably got lucky, assuming at least a partial truth in the story, that all turned out ok. Moral of the story, professional at play, don't try this at home. xoxoxoxo Annette
Whatever her fantasis were or his,there is nothing erotic about this,the wife was raped,pure and simple, and it is hard to find this anything but what it was,hubby leaving the wife to be raped after giving her illegal drugs.Yes,this is just a story,no one is hurt by fantasy,but there is nothing erotic in this to me.
This is clearly a non consent story. It's a poorly plotted one too. It's the wife that has suggested the game in the first place, so there is no logical justification for the husband needing to drug her to "loosen her up".
A stupid story about two stupid characters...1st - The idea of the acting came from the wife...Why the need to drug her? 2nd - What kind of woman accepts to be drugged and enter a strange place alone? 3rd - What kind of a husband drugs his wife, and let her alone in a strange place? 4th - Completely over drugged in an almost catatonic state (she didn't even recognized her husband), how could she remember all the details (cock sizes and all) from the night before? 1*
by
Anonymous08/22/16
Delete your account. Non consent. Drugs. Rape.
by
Anonymous08/22/16
A pretty good laugh.
Drugs his wife so she can "experience" a night as a raped slut. What loving husband doesn't want that for his wife? And what loving wife doesn't want that, with anyone other than her husband?
"So what was the last thing you said before your wife walked out and filed for divorce?" "I just asked her to read this story on Literotica and tell me if she would consider it."
So drugged that she can barely walk? That means she couldn't form consent and that means she was raped. What do you want to bet that there is a video on the internet detailing her rape and considering hubby couldn't be bothered to save her, maybe this way he can't jerk off to her rape.
And unless the bar wants to be shut down, the bouncers would have shut down their little party and probably called the cops and an ambulance. Because that is what men do: look after women who have been drugged.
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Anonymous08/22/16
1*
absurd shit.
by
Anonymous08/23/16
Offensive Story - Belongs in Non Consent
The story would have been fine for this forum if the date rape drug had been omitted.
Everything identical, minus the drugs (and her memory loss) would be100 times better.
You still got my 5 stars, ginormous horse cocks and gallons of cum inside wife = automatic 5! :)
Maybe if she played the game again, no drugs. No cumming for hubby for a few weeks prior (to set the mood). Gets picked up by those same huge guys and taken away for a long weekend. Go Peg!
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Anonymous08/24/16
Reads like a blind date gone wrong. It happens, but too many coincidences make...
...the whole story hard to accept and kinda kills it for me.
Sorry, No. Thank. You.
Idiotic daydream by a pubescent author!!! MINUS 5*!!!
Only laughable that an adult people can write such a crap!!!
Well..
Not the best here... In fact in my opinion you had a good start. But it went down hill quickly.. Yes this game is played many times over. But a 2
hey bubba
Thought you should know. Details about you wife's serial cheating hsve been posted on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com.
You will find out what she was-has been doing before-after the bullshit story she gave you about her friends fantasy play. You were s5et up into believing she would wait to take drugs until you got there. They meant for you to view her being gangbanged in bar
I loved it?
I don't know about the previous comments but I liked it, a lot.Keep writing
Good
This was a good story and well written Thanks
Like the story - watch out on use of Pharma
Great concept and interesting story. Unfortunately husband set himself up for a long stay in the local 'barred' shop. Better for her to enter and play without your Pharma help. You probably got lucky, assuming at least a partial truth in the story, that all turned out ok. Moral of the story, professional at play, don't try this at home. xoxoxoxo Annette
Sorry
Whatever her fantasis were or his,there is nothing erotic about this,the wife was raped,pure and simple, and it is hard to find this anything but what it was,hubby leaving the wife to be raped after giving her illegal drugs.Yes,this is just a story,no one is hurt by fantasy,but there is nothing erotic in this to me.
Remember the old slogan!
Better Things for Better Living Through Chemistry!
(DuPont)
1*
Stories with rape as theme, get an automatic 1* from me.
Wrong category.
This is clearly a non consent story. It's a poorly plotted one too. It's the wife that has suggested the game in the first place, so there is no logical justification for the husband needing to drug her to "loosen her up".
A stupid story about two stupid characters...
A stupid story about two stupid characters...1st - The idea of the acting came from the wife...Why the need to drug her? 2nd - What kind of woman accepts to be drugged and enter a strange place alone? 3rd - What kind of a husband drugs his wife, and let her alone in a strange place? 4th - Completely over drugged in an almost catatonic state (she didn't even recognized her husband), how could she remember all the details (cock sizes and all) from the night before? 1*
Delete your account. Non consent. Drugs. Rape.
A pretty good laugh.
Drugs his wife so she can "experience" a night as a raped slut. What loving husband doesn't want that for his wife? And what loving wife doesn't want that, with anyone other than her husband?
"So what was the last thing you said before your wife walked out and filed for divorce?" "I just asked her to read this story on Literotica and tell me if she would consider it."
Disappointing.
So drugged that she can barely walk? That means she couldn't form consent and that means she was raped. What do you want to bet that there is a video on the internet detailing her rape and considering hubby couldn't be bothered to save her, maybe this way he can't jerk off to her rape.
And unless the bar wants to be shut down, the bouncers would have shut down their little party and probably called the cops and an ambulance. Because that is what men do: look after women who have been drugged.
1*
absurd shit.
Offensive Story - Belongs in Non Consent
The story would have been fine for this forum if the date rape drug had been omitted.
drugs....mehh
The drugs are a key element.
Sadly.
Everything identical, minus the drugs (and her memory loss) would be100 times better.
You still got my 5 stars, ginormous horse cocks and gallons of cum inside wife = automatic 5! :)
Maybe if she played the game again, no drugs. No cumming for hubby for a few weeks prior (to set the mood). Gets picked up by those same huge guys and taken away for a long weekend. Go Peg!
Reads like a blind date gone wrong. It happens, but too many coincidences make...
...the whole story hard to accept and kinda kills it for me.
Sorry, No. Thank. You.
bubba wrote this**`
Thanks for writing.
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