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what an astute observation!!
loved this on the passion thread, very glad you posted it. really made me think about love and life and things i should really work on changing..thanks Lin :)
not what I thought
I thought this was going to take a different direction when I read the title. I like the way you handled it.
Have you come across the embarrassing lover/liver typo? ;)
Ah, to live and be lived.
It takes a poet to not just hit backspace, but to notice, reflect, and draw so much semantic and emotional insight from so little a slip. Bravo!
When a htpo meets a hypo. . .
Most novel, refreshing, and well done.
Just one question,
Did you mean "form",
or were you typing too fast again?
"form"
Well YDD, yes. It's semi intentional. I intended from first, but typed form, and decided to leave it in. But perhaps the line would had worked better with an added adverb.
TY all for the comments.
love/live,
-Lin
Yes Astute!
I love this kind of poem--it's philosophical but simply stated so that it doesn't overwhelm--and it shouldn't because it endorses a basic but critical (at least to me) way of looking at the world. In the last line, I think you could get away without "Both." Just my opinion, but just saying "I do" would end the poem sufficiently--that "Both" sounds a bit awkward to my ear, but maybe it's just me. It's really a wonderful poem. :)
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