All Comments on 'A Weekend to Remember'

You don't write it very well. Maybe you used Google translate.

This shit . Damn you taking lessons from HKD or that other hack nigger randi?

Lost me right there

What? a LW's story and no cheating wife and no cuckold? Just a happy married couple in love and a happy family? Is that a good sign? OF COURSE IT IS!!! 4*

As noted, it does need work. It doeasn't flow well along with a host of other problems. Keep trying.

I think this would have been better suited in Erotica Couplings, too. A lot of the crowd here are cunts.

Any new-married couple would be delighted to receive this tale of heterosexuality fulfilled and running over, never mind the instruction manuals they may also consult to make up for inexperience. As a story (conflict, plot-problem, development, climax and revelation, aftermath) it scarcely exists. But as a vicarious experience, congratulations!

Thanks for posting.

Well written and I would have given it a 4 or 5 in the right category.

LW = Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more

None of that here 1*

This story is exactly where it belongs! A story about a married couple (wife and husband) in love, having fun with each other, will always belong in LW!! 4*

WTF are you on?? This is a loving wives story, well really loving couples story but they don't have a section for that so this is the next best. They also do not have a catagory for slut wives, cuckolds, and they are not loving wives at all so you need to understand love. Knob.

JJ

This True Living Wife story could best be in Romance. Erotic Coupling is also OK, but not quite as good! It would also fit better in Anal than in LW. LW is defined by Literotica* as stories about 'adventurous wives' and Sweetie, in this tale, is usually NOT the instigator. In MOST cases, 'adventurous' means Sweetie is sexually involved with at least one partner (usually male) who is NOT her Hubby. How her escapades affect the marital relationship (whether or not Hubby knows) is, IMHO, a critical (but unstated) component!

AS69 ... just read some of the shorter tales in the LW Hall of Fame grouping and resubmit in Romance. ALSO, get a volunteer editor whose native language is English. Your prose is understandable, but awkward ... sometimes very awkward!

* Literotica's -free- website (not mine or Impo's), so THEIR rules. Impo is free to start a competing site (or simply switch to reading in existing ones) if LIT does not meet Impo's preferences!

Unrated in LW!

Nice to see this in what is usually a cesspool of human depravity named Loving Wives. This story is in the proper section. It has a loving wife ( a real one and not a tongue-in-cheek version). If cucks, swingers and humiliation proponents can flood this section with their shit, then this story is the proverbial lotus thriving in filth.

Wonderful read and the story is in the right category.

Thank you for writing and looking forward to your next tale.

There is nothing in the description of LW that says "adventurous wives". The only thing said there is "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more." Now, if you choose to ignore the "& more" part of the description, probably 90%+ of the stories in LW are miscategorized because the only things listed are swinging and sharing.

Ah, the "& more": Cause of all strife in LW since the beginning. That part is where interpretation comes in, and if you look through the old stories you'll see that the broadest interpretation has always been the case.

We're all guilty of saying that a story doesn't belong in LW, including myself. But to be honest, the only real definition that seems to apply is that there is a couple involved at some point of the story.

Angiesteve69, I apologize for doing this here, there are more appropriate places for this discussion, but I couldn't help myself. Keep bringing these lovely stories.

No story there at all just humping. I didn't like it sorry.

Somehow you made it more boring than it could possibly have been.......

kind of passive

Perfect and the way a happily married couple should always be . Love and explore with only each other. Most stories has the wife acting like a pig with others and not her husband . To me this is much hotter and would love to hear more from u

Well developed and full of all the actions we wish we could still get up for in a long term relationship. Having it in the "Loving Wives" category was a setup error. My expectations in LW is that there will be some tension created in the couple that leads to a decision that ends or strengthens the relationship.

Hope to see more of your stories. Thanks for this effort.

such a fantastic tale - loads of love + affection between 2 people who know each other so well. then they explore every lust-filled idea fully. is there (or will there be) a sequel where mother in law joins in? that would be amazing