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Oral Sex From Sister In Law

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/26/16

quality

Try making up names is stead of insert name bs. Also when talking to self italicize so it's noticeable their not speaking aloud.

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by Anonymous08/26/16

To Anonymous "Quality"

When correcting others, make sure you don't make errors of your own!!
I agree with the bit about the (insert name here) crap but - "... so it's noticeable their not speaking aloud. "
No, no, no!!
NOT 'their'!!!! 'Their' is 'possessive! It belongs to 'them'!
It should be 'they're'!
As in "they are"!!!

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by worshipper62208/26/16

Ditto....

...on the advice. That "insert name" is just plain juvenile!

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by Anonymous08/27/16

I think the plot of your story is a great one, as many SIL and BIL fantasize and would probably do something under the right conditions. Good start, more physical details are good and forget the " insert name here " part and your story will get even better. Eventually, screwing each other hard and again will do a lot for both of them and hopefully would continue ??? Thanks and cannot wait for the next chapter.

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by sabra1602308/27/16

Next Chapter

Continue the story. Thanks

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by runningbear0208/27/16

Thanks

Hi Everyone,

Thanks for commenting on my story and I'm glad you like it. I'll take the advice on board about the [insert name here] thing and I'll use italics when the comments are in the head.

Thanks again!

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by Anonymous08/28/16

LOVE sister in law stories. Keep "em coming

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by Anonymous03/01/17

SILs

Agree that I have fantasised about my sil - a long time ago now but did have a heavy petting session which somehow did not go further. thanks for great story.

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