All Comments on 'Breaking My Own Rules'

by Chimera44

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Panty melting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very hot

You should write more!:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Oh, crikey!

You've made my knickers wet! More please! 5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

Wow. Keep it up. So sexy!

Black_JadeBlack_Jadeover 7 years ago
very sweet

sweet tender scene!!

gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
Obedience On First Encounter??? Hot Story

She may have been a very bad girl but he sure helped her be a bad girl. He asked her for obedience and had to know she could not completely obey the first encounter. Hot to read. Erotic and sensual and not violent. The spanking is not so bad and they are both exhausted so any punishment will have to wait. Will there be more? It was a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Duuude

Your stories are great. I am going to enjoy reading the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Beautifully written. Very explicit, both erotically and emotionally. Enjoyed reading this scene

RunsAmokRunsAmokover 7 years ago
Intense!

Nicely done! This hits a lot of buttons one after the other. The female perspective was well written. There were a couple of things that verged on dangerous behavior (lack of safe word, bondage with no emergency release before he'd gained that much trust) but despite that the scene never broke my suspension of disbelief. It was a very intense scene that pushed things to their boundaries without crossing them. I really enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wow

This is so hot, I am melting.

PhoenixSkyePhoenixSkyealmost 7 years ago
Wow

Definitely panty melting. This story was a trigger for me because I met my first husband after being in a car accident that wrecked my face. Face full of puffy pink scars and he picked me over my gorgeous friends.

Alicia56Alicia56over 5 years ago
Breaking My Own Rules

Have just finished Ch. 1.

Different from Eric and Erica. Am hooked on both stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hits all the right buttons..

Cherie is at the top of my list of favorite female characters. Luv her voice as well as your expert storytelling skills. I could gush, but I won't. Absolutely superb -- every word, every action, every nuance...uncommon perfection. Looking forward to the rest of the series. I hope your muse continues to inspire.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Thanks, this was amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

you made anal sound so painless and easy with no lube

really miss you chimera

Sman4444Sman4444over 2 years ago

So hot - love the woman’s POV. Pretty much perfection - great work. Will definitely read all of your work! Read your bio Hope your heath is improving - love your work and your mind!

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