After The Dead Gods Call

Well now...that's different...

And I do like different.

Well. That was definitely surprising.
I do appreciate that this wasn't a sex story, it is refreshing to read something that's legitimately good sci-fi, as opposed to run-of-the-mill sex stories in a sci-fi setting, or somewhat sci-fi stories centered around sex.
You clearly have some talent, and despite a few minor bits here and there that could easily have been fixed or improved, this was a solid story, and I'm desperate to know more.

I liked it.

Reminds me of "the metamorphosis" by Frank Kafka. Full of imagery and symbolism. Not really sure that it belongs in this category, but quite well written. I happen to like higher levels of literature though, so others may think differently.

weird

a birth and a death but no true meaning. need much more to form a good opinion.

What!?