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by WickedEve04/30/04

challenging

I see your first poetry submission is a sonnet. Glad you tried a more challenging form instead of a simple rhyming pattern.

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by YDD05/01/04

slave's sonnet

An interesting effort in a restrictive form.
You should get points for attempting it.

You could easily remove the strain from a few rhymes, And there must be an alternative to "bald pate", even if it is descriptive.

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by My Erotic Tale12/31/04

tastey

okay this was a prime example
of sonnet. excellent work
descriptive and visual
also enlightening~

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by Guru06/21/05

Very nicely done

A sonnet is very difficult and time consuming to write. To write one well, as you have done, is much more difficult. Bravo!

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