All Comments on 'The Auction'

What a lucky guy! He has a loving wife who made it possible for him to enjoy another woman. 5 Stars.

Writing in "present tense", also known as "stream of consciousness", also known as "making up the shit as I go along", doesn't just make it difficult to suspend disbelief: it seems to actively work against a reader's efforts to immerse themselves in what you're writing. It's like reading porn written by the same guy who makes those annoying instructions for Ikea.

"She agrees to make that bid if I agree to wear the dress and accompany her hubby for the weekend. She shows me a photo of him and I wholeheartedly agree. The weekend comes and Robert picks me up and we head to the resort. I am wearing only a sundress and high heeled sandals. While driving I hike up my dress and allow him an unrestricted view of my married bald pussy."

You know what you left out? The part where the reader falls asleep at their keyboard.

Weekend??? Husband??? Where the fuck was the story. Her husband always wanted to hook up with her but then loans her out to others??? Am I missing something here like a bit of background as to why HER husband agrees to this or does he have no say or is he elsewhere getting his?? I must admit that once the busboy and waiter entered the fray I skimmed cos it seemed pretty boring

An entertaining romp... more please!

I look forward to reading more of you work

But what about her hubby? And why didn't Lisa come along for the weekend?

Well hubby knows all about her encounter, because he got all the details when she got home. He loves to share her with others. 5 Stars

Did she ask her hubby's permission to cheat, I doubt it,hopefully Lily serviced him in exchange.

Lily is so fucking hot!!! 5 Stars.

Hotwives are so awesome! I know I sure do love mine.