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Wow
Seriously,well written and incredibly hot,don't keep me waiting for the next chapter!
Great
Please write another one
Good start
Can't wait to see what happens next
Can't wait to see more!
I think you handled the buildup really well for this story—it draws us right into the scene from the get-go, but still paces it enough to be satisfying. Nicely done!
Great story, looking forward to reading the next chapter! You are such a great Erotic writer, but when are we likely to see the next chapters or your great series of The Fall of the heroes and The priestesses of Northshire Abbey which are great stories???
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