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A Walk by the Sea

byAdrian Leverkuhn©
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by dani_lrlm08/26/16

How very sad

Just what I needed to make my melancholy of today complete.
All day yesterday "the world is too much with us.." played in my head.
Please, please some joyful story next, I feel that you also need it..

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by jetpacksam08/26/16

I'll take the heat

This isn't romance.

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by Anonymous08/26/16

Adrian, you are not alone.....

Thank you. I very much needed to read this today. I lost my mother and my wife within a two-year span. There are lingering issues with my wife's daughter. Sometimes I want to quit -- either move away and start over, or commit suicide as my wife did. And then there are the other times, when I read something like this, and realize that there is still much that I can do for others, and that in the course of doing so, I will help to heal myself. Your words are beautiful. Thank you for helping me today.

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by Anonymous08/26/16

Another story...

... that makes me wish we could put them in multiple or tiered categories. While it is Romance in a fashion, it's primary should be non-erotic.

In either case, a well written story.

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by miscacc20150108/26/16

Holy motherfucking shit

I would like to say that I loved the story, but it was a tough read emotionally. I need to read something lighthearted after this. 5*s

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by rightbank08/27/16

lamentations

melancholy
regret
despair

hope

a brief, hauntingly powerful story that demands introspection

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by Dragonlightone08/27/16

A remberance

I've taken a 'walk by the sea' . . . I'm still doing it. Romance comes in all forms, but always from the heart. This is just such a story. Well done as usual.

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by Sidney4308/27/16

There is not another author on these pages who can weave words into a story as well as you. Five stars.

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by Floribunda08/28/16

A startling beautiful and melancholic look back on a life

It was romantic, frank, and real.

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by Anonymous10/10/16

A beautiful and compelling love story, beautifully written as though from personal experience. Thank you for weaving this tale. A true five! jntiques

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by Anonymous11/20/16

So much love

and pain.
So many hopes
dashed
So good
it hurts

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