All Comments on 'Betrayal'

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Wow!

Powerful and well written. Great emotions here. Thanks.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The curse borne by women everywhere

Remembering every slight, real or imagined

And for the men in her life

The effect is worse ~ guilty while never facing trial.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
lost love

forever following just a step behind

waiting again for another chance

to rear its head - betrayal.

Love is to hand - betrayal is to glove - They go together.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
loss

You forgot to remember to keep your promises.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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