2015 - Kiss Me, You Fool

Don't have the time

or the desire to read this

Another great story. It's a shame some people can't read more than one page. Guess that's why children's books are mainly pictures. Hope to see more from you. Quite an enjoyable read.

If this is your style ...

then there can be done nothing abaout it; I don't want to blame. For me it was a little bit difficult to follow the plot. It would be easier, if the charakters were better described, so you have an image of them in your mind. And in the scenes where more women were participating, it was difficult to know who said what. It was all "she did" - but with 4 shes. Even who is whose sister, and why they are gathering ...
And for my taste, smaller chunks would fit better ...
I have only read third of it yet. Just wanted to give you some feedback other than "wont read" ... because so far I like the story.

Different

Different is sometimes better than routine...I enjoyed this.

Confusing multi-partner scenes

I am presently editing the novel and I understand where some of you may have been confused in the love scenes with multiple partners. If you read the context carefully, you'll understand why that is so. It's purposeful, in fact.
They are experiencing a psychic connection and 'feeling' things with their minds that conjoins with the physicality of their own lovemaking.
There are a couple of precursor events before the first major one in Jean, Carole and Kayla's home.
I agree that it can be a bit confusing, but it's not so bad if you don't stop to look at the details and see the big picture. It's actually very beautiful.

FASCINATING, EROTIC, DIFFERENT, WELL WORTH THE TIME...

Certainly not a quickie but it keeps tugging at the reader's curiosity...and libido...to keep going. Unusually perceptive writing about females, for a guy. I just assumed the author was female until going back to read the bio, out of curiosity. AnAngelReally, you paint such lovely pictures in our mind with words. Now I want to explore your library of works. Thanks!