All Comments on 'Daddy's Boy Has To Be Punished'

Daddy's boy got it! A hot little tale. Dad should have made him suck it clean though. Maybe next time. Patty

i liked your story, but you have to watch your spelling/typos.

Very hot...

Should of carried out the scenes more, give it more imagination

This is one reason why people with no imagination and a limited IQ should not be allowed out of doors or allowed any computer access whatsoever.

I really liked your story. Utter garbage can go to hell :-) Bet he hasn't written a story before on here ;P

This story was fun. I agree with the others who had constructive criticism, e.g. daddy shoulda made him open his mouth for it, and shot it on his tongue.

The spanking was a little brutal :-* lol

you could give the spanking more ... passion? Nice story. Practise more! What ... you've only got two stories up?

Looking forward to a redraft and to see your writing improve :-P

I used to suck my step father off, then went into the service it was so difficult looking at all those beautiful cocks in the shower and not being able to suck them. I did manage to snag a boyfriend for about 12 months god his cock was great, to this day I get hard looking at a nice built black man. But right now I would love to just have a cock to suck on or have in my ass getting fucked hard.