All Comments on 'Friends Always Ch. 01'

I absolutely love it when best friends fall in love, though I never encountered a pair with such age difference before. I have high hopes for this one, it's simply perfect from any angle and promises a slow but powerful burn.

Only a 5* will do here :)

I'm obsessed! Please write more!

great story, more please

Forever best friends is as it should be always in a relationship. Loved!

You sure started the fire burning...now hope you will feed the flames with more!

Wow! Way to leave us hanging!

This is a very good story that could be great with a little more attention to grammar. The storyline is excellent. Your pace and style really draw me in. There are a few parts that are just confusing and detract. For example, in paragraph two, I'm not sure if Charlie is a man or woman. Based on the third sentence, I think Charlie is a 39 year old woman and then the storyteller would be a 24 year old man. I'm confused and that confusion doesn't add to the story. I'm not trying to be picky. I just don't want things to distract from what has the potential to be a great story!

I liked it a lot, continue your story please!!

Thanks for the feedback, especially for the grammatical suggestions :) Chapter 2 is written, just needs to be typed out!

I hope you update soon