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by Anonymous08/26/16

a good opener

Needed a LOT more depth and action. It was a good start, but really could have been fleshed out to a full event and not a brief surmise.

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by Anonymous08/26/16

Great Start

Great story line which can really be added to. Surprise and exciting endind with a big door being opened to much more between all parties. More please!

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by Anonymous02/19/17

Good Idea

But this is far to short.

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