Mom's Sweaty Ride Pt. 01

As often as this subject is visited in this area, this story stood out from most of the others. I liked how the POV kept changing from mom to son and back again. The only change I would have made would be increase the mom's tits. If the son can have a fat 9" cock, the mom can have 40D knockers. But that's just me. The bigger the boobs the better. Can't wait for chapter two.

Yes keep it going.

Great first story

This was a great first. Still many grammar and basic story errors considering you had editor(s), but a great read. Please keep it going.

Great story!!!

Of course it has been done before....but this was masterful.

Thanks Don

Yes, keep them cumming.

Very good start to the story line. Look forward to future submissions.

Similar to the others, but good

Normally I don't enjoy the constant switching of view-points in a story, as it usually makes for a confusing read, however this time I found it enjoyable.

Eagerly awaiting more installments.

5/5

Mother and Sons

Are my favorite stories, and even better in cars with Dads! Since I'm not here to proof read it for grammer or spelling, it was hot, wet and juicy and so beliveable, Keep up the good work!

Good

Try to be a bit more original and focus more on editing.

great start

Yes it has been done before but you took it and made it your own. You did the switch back between mother and son without getting us lost, good attention to the details. Can't wait for more, the trip is just starting and I am along for the long haul.

Great First Attempt

I agree with the previous comment about the switching of POV. I don't usually like it but you handled it well. The other comments about grammar and spelling should be ignored. Yes, it was a storyline well covered in the past but your take on it was very good. I wish my first submissions had been as good.

5 STAR

Agree with others POV can be confusing but yours was easy to follow , i love the back seat topic myself so i eagerly look forward to following chapters , as for spelling and grammar fanatics here , ignore them ,this is not a literary site its an outlet for erotic stories , nothing more or less ,also you will notice that most of the grammar fanatics remain anonymous giving you no way to reply to there critique .

Great ride

I agree this was a great story and well written. If I have one small complaint about Mother and Son stories it is only that the sons cock is always bigger than the Fathers and just by the law of averages that cannot be true. Having said that I really enjoyed the story and look forward to the next round.

Wow

Incredible, fuck I hope she gets pregnant.

Good start

Very exciting. Please continue

Very nice

Keep them cumming

Loved it

What a great story, yes mother riding is the backseat with her son has been done before but you did a great job making it your own. I look foreword to more hot mother son action in the future. I hope dad has some difficulty sleeping and takes a sleeping pill when they get to the hotel. Dad can snore away in one bed while the bed next to them creeks and moans all night as the son fucks the shit out of his loving mother and they both scream in orgasm.

I will bet that this son is overjoyed at having to move back in with mom and dad, he can take evening classes so he is free to mount his mother each morning when dad leaves for work. Unlike his previous girlfriends the unplanned sex between mother and son allowed the son to experience of sex without a condom. Both mother and son will crave the unbridled passion of hot bareback incestious sex, and the son will keep his mothers pussy a sodden mess of jism. Despite her age, mommy will begin to desire the pangs of motherhood and realize this could be her last chance at motherhood. A mere 6 months after their illicit affair begins mommy can confess her desire to her son and stop taking the pill. The couple will be even more insatiable as the son seeks to breed his dear mother.

Great story could.be the beginning of many more hope to.read more soon.

Fuck in Vegas

You need to get thin in Vegas and have them get caught twist is he is ok with it

Well done.

Great story. Please tell me there will be a sequel.

Good story

Excellent hope you continue story

Good Work!

Would like to see more from you.

Good work.

That was a great first story .Real good job very entertaining .Will be waiting for your next story and hope you do more with this one .Good Luck and thanks for the story .Keep writing and I'll keep reading

Thank you

Wow is all I can say. I came home from work to find over 60000 views of my story and it is still less than a day old.

Thank you to all who favorited my story. For a first timer I did not expect this at all. Ok so here is the news. I will begin writing part 2 shortly. I will wait a couple of days and see what peoples suggestions are. I kinda know what I am going to do but maybe someone will have an idea or direction I haven't thought of. I also promise that it won't be long before the next one is out.

I will take a little more time with part 2. I rushed this one a bit. (hey this was my first story and I was excited) I want to make sure the next one is a home run for you all as well. I wrote this one in less than 2 days then another day or two for edits and I published it. The second one will take a little longer.

Thanks again and post me your suggestions and comments. I also encourage anyone out there to try writing your own story you may find you really like it too. -richman3

1st or 3rd

I had to reread a couple of paragraphs because I was not sure who was talking. I believe it was just the wrong pronoun used such as she when you meant me. I do remember that it was a shift in person from 1st to 3rd or vice versa. Other than that it was a great read, keep the chapters cumming (sic).

Loved it

Hoping she got pregnant

Wonderful

Keep up the Great work

Love this story

I'm glad your continuing with this story, loved it.

Definitely want more

This is a great beginning to an amazing story, please do more on this one for sure!

Great Story

Please continue. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

Nicely done

I liked the alternating point of view, as it gave mom's side as well. I am always interested in the woman's take on the action.

Take your time. You're not on deadline, so if you don't get a story out in a few days, no one is going to fire you. Sometimes it takes some time for things to gel in your mind, and on paper, as it were, and you will think of things to put in after a rereading of your work-though sometimes a story takes on a life of its own and almost writes itself. I'm looking forward to more installments of this adventure. Thirty hours of driving is about three days for most people. A lot can happen.....

good intro

I hope there is no "the dad knew and was ok with it all along" reveal that is just a big cop out that's been done to death and the flimsy excuse leading up to it usually makes no sense. Lead the story somewhere else please and keeping the element of danger present is what makes these stories fun.

Hoping for more

Fantastic first story and I hope it continues. I'm also a fan of this genre and this would definitely be one I would love to see continued. Keep up the good work!

excellent take it further.

more sneaking around, more nearly getting caught, get her knocked up!

yes, truly a great story,

and a great comment from the anon who wrote "Loved it." This fellow fan speculates that once the idiotic really insane "taboo" on a boy coupling with his mom is batted away, the son will feel free to "mount his mother" whenever the fuck he feels like it. That is so very true. It's like there's a powerful magnet drawing the kid's hard young cock to the warm wet hairy hole he came out of. Nothing can ever feel as good, as comfy and cozy and loving--just so damn right--to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt. When he's up inside his mother up to his balls, he loses control and the son does indeed "fuck the living shit out of dear old mom." Then he blows his young balls and shoots every last drop of his semen up the cunt of all his boyish dreams, his own damn birth canal!

Hot ride

You need to detail the rest of the trip.

For over an hour?

Great story except the part about fucking for over an hour. Must be a porn star son you have there!

REALLY ENJOYED IT

Another will be welcomed.

Put some hair on a pussy.

Don't be too quick in adding another woman for a Lesbian/Bi woman theme

Knock her up!

Ditch the dad and let them fuck like they should, she needs to get knocked up and to scream and cum all the time.

like the story, good work. Don't rush things and dont knock the mom up.

Great story!

Since my father died when I was ten, always wanted to try my mother but never did. She set me up with one of her friends for my first time!

It was a good read. I look forward to the next one. And keeping it a secret from the dad adds a good spice. Maybe next one she sneaks into his hotel room and fucks him like there's no tomorrow.

Jeez its like she had no tits?

Really, really come on, come on as a tad of foreplay and while the Jeep was a rocking maybe next time?

MORE...MORE...MORE

Like you, I'm a fan of this kind of story. It also helps me that she is so petite (some of the best sex I ever had was with VERY petite women). Please keep your word and write more....

DougNTexas

Where is part 2?

Very hot story

Very hot and made me very horny. Waiting for part b.

Nice!

These stories are nearly always very hot and this one is no exception. You have to put things like why mom and son didn't sit on the front seat, or why mom wasn't wearing panties aside and just enjoy the story. Good job overall. I sort of laughed when mom talked about her bodies (not body's), wondering how many bodies she had. Anyway, thank you.

5/5

I like this genre. Hope there is more coming.

Risky/stealthy sex is the best

The way she let her thighs slap so loud and made the car smell like sex were the hottest parts. More of that please, loud sweaty sex is super hot.

You mentioned suggestions so how about these:

- Using the seatback or dash as leverage to ride her son extra hard and loud.
- Handjob or blowjob under a restaurant table.
- Sex in a public bathroom, maybe up against the door while the dad waits outside.
- Sex in the hotel pool or hot tub, under the water where he can't see them.
- Sex in the same room while he's asleep. Even better, sex in bed right beside him.
- Sex in the same room while he's still awake. Maybe cuddled under the bedcovers behind his back while he's preoccupied watching TV? Or maybe while he's in the bathroom. Imagine him coming back to her freshly fucked and the room reeking of sex but he's still oblivious.

Those are just random ideas, not exactly car sex, but in any case I'm excited to see you continue this story.

Not another Mom in a car.!!!

But this was better than most and the promise of a continued hotter story line. Then you just might rate higher than a 4 star writer....So please continue....