The story is superbly well done, and the alternating POVs give it a nuanced twist. Very good start to what we/re all hoping will become a series. Thanks.
Once again I want to thank everyone who has read this story. As of right now it is the number one most read story of the last 30 days in just 3 days. So thank you.
News
Part 2 has been written. Now begins the editing process. My bio has details on how you can be a beta reader. Personally I think part two is even hotter than part one but that will be up to you all.
I will also be posting an edited version of part one to fix a few mistakes and a few continutiy errors with part two. (one big one is I made her tits just a little bigger in part 2) anyway part 2 will be out soon just give me some time to make it just right for you guys so that I won't have to post an edited version of it.
I also think that part 3 won't be too long either as quite frankly I want to see what happens to my favorite son and mom and the only way for that to happen is for me to write it.
Thanks again
by
Anonymous08/29/16
A suggestion
Since the mom seems to be adventurous why not do anal in the same position?
by
Anonymous08/29/16
Stopped reading...dual perception stories not my thing
1 point of view is fine. 2 , skipping it. Who gives a shit about her past anyhow . I made it to the word bubblehead if u wanna kmow when I gave up....and I Love these kind of stories so thanks for fucking up a good idea.
Great take on a much repeated theme.
Mom needs to have unbridled fucking with son and possibly even get knocked up.
Anal in part 2 would be a great way forward and even perhaps a cowgirl ride with mom facing son in the car. I am sure you can figure out a way to do this.
I always loved the mom/son backseat stories. Good job! I would love to see a chapter describing what happens after they get back home.
by
Anonymous08/30/16
Really good
Honestly I never comment on the site, but your story was quite good that I enjoyed reading it several times. I liked the back and forth dialogue and I think you really nailed down some of the characters inner voice.
I wondered if you could get both of them naked in the backseat and get the son to suck some mommie titties? And also a full fledged doggie fuck rather than only the lap dance fucking seen in all backseat stories.
I'd like to learn more about these two and read about their continuing adventures; they certainly seem ready for more. You've also got good characters and so while you take them forward I loved to hear more about their back story. Exactly what led to their willingness to push the limits?
by
Anonymous09/03/16
how about a backseat trip with grandmother and musclebound stud grandson?
always love the various mother/son backseat (secret) sex stories, including yours! fantastic and i can always read and re-read some bit of action and dialogue that i might miss and can get off on. i'm utterly into power control role reversal situations, and for me the bigger the difference in age and "looks" between the female and the male makes it that much more kinky, dirty, erotic and hot!
SO i was thinking how about a new story about some long time widowed, way past her looks and prime but always secretly horny as hell grandmother (mid 70's) who the family thinks is this dainty prim and proper moral sweet grandmother (little do they know!) who schemes, plans to get her incredibly handsome musclebound bodybuilder 6'2 280 pounds or so assholish stuck on himself screws anything that moves grandson, only in his mid 20's!
i'm thinking the grandson and his parents are spending time with widowed grandmother's at her lake house, preparing her to move either into their house or close by due to her aloneness,
it takes a few weeks to get all of her affairs in order, all of which the grandmother knows and has worked into her plan.. she is beyond lust seeing her handsome musclebound bodybuilder grandson strutting around in barely there clothing, while his parents are for the few weeks rarely at her house, going back and forth settling matters and living arrangements for the grandmother.
meanwhile musclebound stud grandson is doing his usual routine of working out and going out to screw any pretty thing he can, ignoring her requests not to come back to her house to late, flaunting his freedom and his body in front of her and so on, basically a stuck up asshole..
however, the whole time the grandmother is plotting, plotting her plan on him. she has been doing a number of things, secretly feeding him various aphrodisiacs in his protein shakes, wearing similar sexual arousal perfume, making him even more horny then usual 24/7.. she then wickedly starts feeding him estrogen performance NON-enhancers in his food and shakes to where he can either not get it up when he's trying to pick up a beautiful young woman and/or has no interest in sex, and he actually stops going out to get pussy altogether...
quickly, it's just him and grandmother in her house and quickly it turns out he is ONLY horny and gets aroused when he's around HER! he has no idea why, it's grossed out by it, weirded out about it, and doesn't understand why anything she does, anything she wears turns him on, his 75ish "OLD" grandmother.. he doesn't know about the drugs turning him on and turning him off she is dishing out to him, to change him and his desires....
finally the day arrives when his parents and him are to pack up and take grandmother to live either with them or very close by... and the grandmother uses her final tactic, she coats her old tired loose hasn't been used since GOD knows when pussy with a special pussy lubricant she found online from overseas that is made up of unknown various substances designed to not only tighten up any pussy at any age or condition but also will make any man's erection how with never felt before incredible pleasure!
it is this that she uses, along with her aphrodisiac perfume, and the horny drugs in his food nonstop that run thru his body 24/7 for the past few weeks to use to capture him during their trip in the backseat of the way overcrowded car with parents riding in the front! old grandmother conveniently wears a thin summer dress with no underwear.. eventually because of the close quarters, the stud can't help himself and screws grandmother, and more then once.. his inner dialogue is one of many conflicting emotions," this is so wrong, what a freak i am, this is my old grandmother, how could i do this to her, why does it feel so right and so incredible, damn, i can't help it" and so on,
and can't believe (or understand!) why he's so horny for not only for a old woman, but his own prime and proper sweet little grandmother and can't believe how her pussy feels! meanwhile grandmother puts on the GREATEST ACTING of all time! acting all embarassed and ashamed and please don't to her grandson, and whispering for him to stop and i'm your grandmother, this is wrong and so on. meanwhile of course she is loving it and wickedly knows her plan is working!
in the end, he actually becomes addicted to grandmother and her pussy, never knowing or realizing everything she did to him to make him addicted to her, he gives up young hot female pussy forever and him so mindfucked rationalizing that "hey, pussy is pussy, not matter who it belongs to!' and "at least i don't have to worry about pregnancy with grandma!' and other mindfucked rationalizations!
she for her part continues the greatest acting of all time, rationalizing with him, saying it's okay, she understands his needs and she needs love to and they can take care of each other and she'll never tell his parents or anyone and no, he's not wrong, it is what it is and so on, always portraying herself as the innocent grandmother who comes to acknowledge his sexual needs and let it be known since he can't help it, and she needs love and sex too, they can help each other out (to her wicked smirk delight!)...
grandson moves in with grandmother and they became secret lovers 24/7 (due to her FOREVER using her tactics (drugs and pussy lubricant) on him without him ever knowing and her ultimate wicked kinky plan of capture and conquer of her own incredible handsome full of himself bodybuilder grandson worked and works for all time sake! he is tamed and pussy whipped the stud by his own grandmother and never knows why!.. OKAY, SORRY TO GO ON AND ON and ramble! i don't know if this storyline and idea would be kinky and dirty and hot enough to turn you on to write a story and chapters (i figure it would take more then a few chapters to make it as realistic and believable, not campy and silly) or not... i don't think i could write it, i think i'm better at story ideas, then writing and actual scenes/dialogue!.... ANYONE ELSE AS WELL AS THIS GREAT WRITER RICHMAN3 THINK THIS STORY IS DIRTY HOT?!
A great start to what could be a huge cross country adventure between mother/son, I look forward to further episodes..(bookmarked)
by
Anonymous09/05/16
Dead Plot
You write well, but this "Mom-sits-on-sons-lap-in-car" has been done to death, and despite the change in perspective, you have far too many similarities in the story from the DOZEN that are found on this site alone for it to be interesting. I have read them all, I know. I will refrain from voting on this one for that reason. Part of writing good erotica these days rests in the idea, the concept. If I am going to use an old plot idea, I had better alter the hell out of it or else it will be a trite, worn out piece. Keep writing and I will look for more work from you!
Yes, this scenario has been done to death, but when I get off to a story, it gets a 5. So, 5 here!
by
Anonymous09/06/16
Fanstastic. 5*
The buildup and narration was artful. The scenario has been done plenty, but this is a good one. How about writing a scenario where a daughter sits on her father's lap?
I have read a few of the car stories and this was one of the best
by
Anonymous09/14/16
Good Start
This was a good start to a nice little story. The tininess of the mother added to the story, as did her inherent horniness. I look for to the tale continuing, with the Mom finding new ways to capture her son's lusty side. Hopefully you will find a way of getting her mouth wrapped around his big dick before too many more miles are covered. Thanx for the read
I've read a few other stories that have similar plots, and this one ranks up there among them. Great start, I couldn't wait to read part 2. The Mom seems hot as fuck and very wound up, I just hope the son is able to rise to the occasion and match her sex drive stroke for stroke.
this was a great start to a big story and look forward to more of this you have great love it I love these typs of storys. this get a 10 . keep wrighting and thatnk for shareing with all of us .
by
Anonymous09/21/16
CROSS COUNTRY FUCK
Waiting on the other 25 hours. WOW
by
Anonymous09/21/16
My Fantasy also!
T enjoy lap riding as well. Makes it seem more real and sexy. Thanks for a great story so far. Kind of like son gets hurt and mom has to take care of him!
My god, thats brilliant what I just read. I'll sleep well now, lol. Thankyou 😊
by
Anonymous11/10/16
Not really perfect
I didnt like the fact that ben, having the character of a negligent husband, always puts out a comment here and there where it clearly wasn't needed - or just for the sake of having something else going on aside from the main event. The character background was good, but the convos... not really.
English
It's a common genre, burt...
The story is superbly well done, and the alternating POVs give it a nuanced twist. Very good start to what we/re all hoping will become a series. Thanks.
Part 2
Once again I want to thank everyone who has read this story. As of right now it is the number one most read story of the last 30 days in just 3 days. So thank you.
News
Part 2 has been written. Now begins the editing process. My bio has details on how you can be a beta reader. Personally I think part two is even hotter than part one but that will be up to you all.
I will also be posting an edited version of part one to fix a few mistakes and a few continutiy errors with part two. (one big one is I made her tits just a little bigger in part 2) anyway part 2 will be out soon just give me some time to make it just right for you guys so that I won't have to post an edited version of it.
I also think that part 3 won't be too long either as quite frankly I want to see what happens to my favorite son and mom and the only way for that to happen is for me to write it.
Thanks again
A suggestion
Since the mom seems to be adventurous why not do anal in the same position?
Stopped reading...dual perception stories not my thing
1 point of view is fine. 2 , skipping it. Who gives a shit about her past anyhow . I made it to the word bubblehead if u wanna kmow when I gave up....and I Love these kind of stories so thanks for fucking up a good idea.
Great
Great take on a much repeated theme.
Mom needs to have unbridled fucking with son and possibly even get knocked up.
Anal in part 2 would be a great way forward and even perhaps a cowgirl ride with mom facing son in the car. I am sure you can figure out a way to do this.
Great
Loved this story, you have to continue, you still have another 28hrs of the journey to cover.. love this type of story thanks xxSuexx
Keep this going!
I always loved the mom/son backseat stories. Good job! I would love to see a chapter describing what happens after they get back home.
Really good
Honestly I never comment on the site, but your story was quite good that I enjoyed reading it several times. I liked the back and forth dialogue and I think you really nailed down some of the characters inner voice.
Nice job, looking forward to more.
Great
I wondered if you could get both of them naked in the backseat and get the son to suck some mommie titties? And also a full fledged doggie fuck rather than only the lap dance fucking seen in all backseat stories.
Great story.
I'd like to learn more about these two and read about their continuing adventures; they certainly seem ready for more. You've also got good characters and so while you take them forward I loved to hear more about their back story. Exactly what led to their willingness to push the limits?
how about a backseat trip with grandmother and musclebound stud grandson?
always love the various mother/son backseat (secret) sex stories, including yours! fantastic and i can always read and re-read some bit of action and dialogue that i might miss and can get off on. i'm utterly into power control role reversal situations, and for me the bigger the difference in age and "looks" between the female and the male makes it that much more kinky, dirty, erotic and hot!
SO i was thinking how about a new story about some long time widowed, way past her looks and prime but always secretly horny as hell grandmother (mid 70's) who the family thinks is this dainty prim and proper moral sweet grandmother (little do they know!) who schemes, plans to get her incredibly handsome musclebound bodybuilder 6'2 280 pounds or so assholish stuck on himself screws anything that moves grandson, only in his mid 20's!
i'm thinking the grandson and his parents are spending time with widowed grandmother's at her lake house, preparing her to move either into their house or close by due to her aloneness,
it takes a few weeks to get all of her affairs in order, all of which the grandmother knows and has worked into her plan.. she is beyond lust seeing her handsome musclebound bodybuilder grandson strutting around in barely there clothing, while his parents are for the few weeks rarely at her house, going back and forth settling matters and living arrangements for the grandmother.
meanwhile musclebound stud grandson is doing his usual routine of working out and going out to screw any pretty thing he can, ignoring her requests not to come back to her house to late, flaunting his freedom and his body in front of her and so on, basically a stuck up asshole..
however, the whole time the grandmother is plotting, plotting her plan on him. she has been doing a number of things, secretly feeding him various aphrodisiacs in his protein shakes, wearing similar sexual arousal perfume, making him even more horny then usual 24/7.. she then wickedly starts feeding him estrogen performance NON-enhancers in his food and shakes to where he can either not get it up when he's trying to pick up a beautiful young woman and/or has no interest in sex, and he actually stops going out to get pussy altogether...
quickly, it's just him and grandmother in her house and quickly it turns out he is ONLY horny and gets aroused when he's around HER! he has no idea why, it's grossed out by it, weirded out about it, and doesn't understand why anything she does, anything she wears turns him on, his 75ish "OLD" grandmother.. he doesn't know about the drugs turning him on and turning him off she is dishing out to him, to change him and his desires....
finally the day arrives when his parents and him are to pack up and take grandmother to live either with them or very close by... and the grandmother uses her final tactic, she coats her old tired loose hasn't been used since GOD knows when pussy with a special pussy lubricant she found online from overseas that is made up of unknown various substances designed to not only tighten up any pussy at any age or condition but also will make any man's erection how with never felt before incredible pleasure!
it is this that she uses, along with her aphrodisiac perfume, and the horny drugs in his food nonstop that run thru his body 24/7 for the past few weeks to use to capture him during their trip in the backseat of the way overcrowded car with parents riding in the front! old grandmother conveniently wears a thin summer dress with no underwear.. eventually because of the close quarters, the stud can't help himself and screws grandmother, and more then once.. his inner dialogue is one of many conflicting emotions," this is so wrong, what a freak i am, this is my old grandmother, how could i do this to her, why does it feel so right and so incredible, damn, i can't help it" and so on,
and can't believe (or understand!) why he's so horny for not only for a old woman, but his own prime and proper sweet little grandmother and can't believe how her pussy feels! meanwhile grandmother puts on the GREATEST ACTING of all time! acting all embarassed and ashamed and please don't to her grandson, and whispering for him to stop and i'm your grandmother, this is wrong and so on. meanwhile of course she is loving it and wickedly knows her plan is working!
in the end, he actually becomes addicted to grandmother and her pussy, never knowing or realizing everything she did to him to make him addicted to her, he gives up young hot female pussy forever and him so mindfucked rationalizing that "hey, pussy is pussy, not matter who it belongs to!' and "at least i don't have to worry about pregnancy with grandma!' and other mindfucked rationalizations!
she for her part continues the greatest acting of all time, rationalizing with him, saying it's okay, she understands his needs and she needs love to and they can take care of each other and she'll never tell his parents or anyone and no, he's not wrong, it is what it is and so on, always portraying herself as the innocent grandmother who comes to acknowledge his sexual needs and let it be known since he can't help it, and she needs love and sex too, they can help each other out (to her wicked smirk delight!)...
grandson moves in with grandmother and they became secret lovers 24/7 (due to her FOREVER using her tactics (drugs and pussy lubricant) on him without him ever knowing and her ultimate wicked kinky plan of capture and conquer of her own incredible handsome full of himself bodybuilder grandson worked and works for all time sake! he is tamed and pussy whipped the stud by his own grandmother and never knows why!.. OKAY, SORRY TO GO ON AND ON and ramble! i don't know if this storyline and idea would be kinky and dirty and hot enough to turn you on to write a story and chapters (i figure it would take more then a few chapters to make it as realistic and believable, not campy and silly) or not... i don't think i could write it, i think i'm better at story ideas, then writing and actual scenes/dialogue!.... ANYONE ELSE AS WELL AS THIS GREAT WRITER RICHMAN3 THINK THIS STORY IS DIRTY HOT?!
A Great Start
A great start to what could be a huge cross country adventure between mother/son, I look forward to further episodes..(bookmarked)
Dead Plot
You write well, but this "Mom-sits-on-sons-lap-in-car" has been done to death, and despite the change in perspective, you have far too many similarities in the story from the DOZEN that are found on this site alone for it to be interesting. I have read them all, I know. I will refrain from voting on this one for that reason. Part of writing good erotica these days rests in the idea, the concept. If I am going to use an old plot idea, I had better alter the hell out of it or else it will be a trite, worn out piece. Keep writing and I will look for more work from you!
Death 5
Yes, this scenario has been done to death, but when I get off to a story, it gets a 5. So, 5 here!
Fanstastic. 5*
The buildup and narration was artful. The scenario has been done plenty, but this is a good one. How about writing a scenario where a daughter sits on her father's lap?
Excellent story
I have read a few of the car stories and this was one of the best
Good Start
This was a good start to a nice little story. The tininess of the mother added to the story, as did her inherent horniness. I look for to the tale continuing, with the Mom finding new ways to capture her son's lusty side. Hopefully you will find a way of getting her mouth wrapped around his big dick before too many more miles are covered. Thanx for the read
Fantastic start
I've read a few other stories that have similar plots, and this one ranks up there among them. Great start, I couldn't wait to read part 2. The Mom seems hot as fuck and very wound up, I just hope the son is able to rise to the occasion and match her sex drive stroke for stroke.
Awesome
Very good, thanks
this was a great start to a big story and look forward to more of this you have great love it I love these typs of storys. this get a 10 . keep wrighting and thatnk for shareing with all of us .
CROSS COUNTRY FUCK
Waiting on the other 25 hours. WOW
My Fantasy also!
T enjoy lap riding as well. Makes it seem more real and sexy. Thanks for a great story so far. Kind of like son gets hurt and mom has to take care of him!
Hehe
My god, thats brilliant what I just read. I'll sleep well now, lol. Thankyou 😊
Not really perfect
I didnt like the fact that ben, having the character of a negligent husband, always puts out a comment here and there where it clearly wasn't needed - or just for the sake of having something else going on aside from the main event. The character background was good, but the convos... not really.
Hot Read****
Thanks for sharing.
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