Teen Turns: Hot Tub Seduction

Too short...

I do not like being critical, but this seemed fragmented and not well put together... Measuring against your other stories, it doesn't do well... Sorry...

I agree it was too short. What was written was great but you should added the nightcap as well were Miranda figured out she was at least bi if not full on lesbian.

Next please

Looking forward to your next chapter. Loved the ending.

Not your best

I've read a lot of your stories, and while this is by no means bad, I just don't feel that it's your best piece of work.

It was good. No complaints from me.

Okay I'll bite

Just how long of a night was it going to be? How long of a week was it going to be or whatever? Why didn't the other cheerleaders come to the party? Had they been to Tiffany's partys before been seduced by mom? This is at least worth a few more chapters. I loved the premise of the story it just doesn't go far enough. I would not think that Tiffany and the other girl would not be dumb enough to not know what was going on in the hot tub plus grandma on the phone had to know something was going on. So does Miranda go to Mrs. Steele's bed later that night? I certainly hope so. I give it a 5 not necessarily for this chapter but for the one s.

Loved the seduction scene and want more

Having gotten familiar with your writing styloe

it didn't surprise me where this one ended. Also hoping for more chapters in this story line! Once again you have opened some unanswered doors that will hopefully expanded upon. Like Janelle is submissive to Tiffany (sounded like it)? Janelle's mother is obviously submissive to Rachel. I would like to see a back story on those 2 relationships, that would include Rachel and Tiffany tag teaming the submissive Janelle and her mother, and doing it in a way that is a surprise to Janelle's mother (just for shock value). Good way for Janelle's mother to find out she has so much in common with her daughter. Just my mind running in different directions. Great work as far as I am concerned!

ok

I am not a big fan of your stories, I think they are just wrong, I know these are made up stories, but this one is a little better then the rest of your stories, but just as I said before just because a girl has sex with another girl does not mean she has turned her, but at least this one was a little better

very good story

I really like the shameless nature of Rachel. I'd really like to read a sequel with a strap-on.

Another Great One

You are amazing and have a great talent. Never stop writing please!

Excellent! Stories like this are hot as fuck.

I love your lesbian seduction stories! Older "mom' lesbian with teen is so hot. You are my favorite writer on Literotica.
My pussy is so hot after reading this story. I want to be dominated.
Kisses,
Liz

Hot!!

This was a very sexy story very sensual!

another five star

I love 99% of your stories, and this one has winner all over it, yes I could see some of this story unwinding, and still loved it. thanks again, and please keep writing.

Another great story

Absolutely love the stories you write involving "turning" a straight woman. This is right up there with the best of them. Keep up the awesome work!

and again with the great story

definitely need to continue this series pls

Amazing

I want this story to go on forever...

More than a hot tub.

You really have a way with the Ladies. I'm taking notes, I wonder about the tapping. Mostly they don't like their clit treated like a cock, they just are so responsive. Its/I'm/Its hard to hold back. *~*,

The use of the term. " mommy". Very hot...and not in an incestrial way...it notes gentle sensual domination....

hot!

gosh....where can i find a mommy like that?

Thank you

This story was amazing. I haven't come as many times reading others. Maybe it's because my name IS Miranda...

Will there be more from these two?

Please let there be more from these two!

More, please?

Great! Hope there's more to come.

I don't know how this got such high ratings, but this is actually laughably bad.

mommy...

the premise of a mommy with a cheerleader is very hot......but develop the characters more fully....in the hot tub and without much character interaction suddenly mommy reaches over and slides her hand up the leg.....that is not believable....

Reading it over and over again

This is one story that I regularly come back to again and again. I dream about being Miranda in the hot tub with Ms. Rachel, being seduced by her, and eventually becoming her pet. It speaks so directly to what I would love to have happen in my own life. An excellent, wonderful story that speaks so directly to me. Thank you so much for writing it!

G R E A T...............

This is one of the best stories I have ever read; made me so hard and horny I had to beat off while reading it. Would love to have been able to watch this kind of action again. Once I did get to watch two girls/women and it was fantastic to see.

Highly erotic!

Wow, this was one of the most erotic short stories I've read on this site so far! thank you for sharing it with us!

I think a bit more 'hints' and less blunt chat would have been more seductive, but all and all pretty hot. But most of all, you should have pt. 2. "hot tub ..after they fall asleep" lol
And seems pretty clear, "something' is going to happen that night between her 2 friends..