All Comments on 'Fix You'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I see Coldplay!

Nice choice of title. Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
make a part 2

deserves a second part

NaughtyJuiceNaughtyJuiceover 7 years ago
Excellent!

I rarely read in this category. I'm glad the first story I found was yours. Nice build to the climax, wonderful, creative story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

I was not aware I had a thing for porn with plot twists.

delairiumdelairiumover 6 years ago
Absolutely loved it

This is one of my favorite stories. I am Fascinated by the idea of the slave's necessity for maintenance. It adds a sense of realistic possibility to the story. Making it all the more entertaining and, in my personal opinion, incredibly arousing. I would love to hear the beginning of the story if you ever care to write it. Although I have to say, my imagination has grown quite Wild with the idea of him manipulating one of his patients against their will to be as he wanted them to become.

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