She broke into his apartment long after he went to bed. He considered it breaking in, even if she did use the spare key he pointed out to her months ago. After all, if she had bothered knocking he wouldn't have let her in. But instead, she used the key, h
Too much talk about a KEY, we already know she 'broke' in using it, and that he said he wouldn't let her in, no need to say she didn't enter like she was welcomed, it just repeats what was said in different words.
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Anonymous09/04/16
Fail to see how this is romance. Why isn't she welcome? Why does she have to 'break in' knowing she's not welcome, why does she cry with no explanation and he uses sex to stop her? WHY WHY WHY??? Feels like a middle of a story, where is the start? and ending?
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She broke into his apartment long after he went to bed. He considered it breaking in, even if she did use the spare key he pointed out to her months ago. After all, if she had bothered knocking he wouldn't have let her in. But instead, she used the key, h
Too much talk about a KEY, we already know she 'broke' in using it, and that he said he wouldn't let her in, no need to say she didn't enter like she was welcomed, it just repeats what was said in different words.
Fail to see how this is romance. Why isn't she welcome? Why does she have to 'break in' knowing she's not welcome, why does she cry with no explanation and he uses sex to stop her? WHY WHY WHY??? Feels like a middle of a story, where is the start? and ending?
A WET DREAM
turns into a day-mare. TK U MLJ LV NV
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