All Comments on 'Retroactive Control Pt. 01'

by Anostus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Finish This Story

This story is great but it needs more! Another chapter or two could make this epic

nudist26nudist26over 7 years ago

There is a lot of potential here. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I've read this (and one more chapter) on another website, but none of the titles of your other stories here on Literotica are on the other website's author page.

Is it really your story?

AnostusAnostusover 7 years agoAuthor
To the anonymous whose post begins "I've read this (and one more chapter)..."

I did previously post this to mcstories.com. I'm confused by your statement that none of the other stories I've written here are listed on my author page on mcstories, since aside from "Procrustes, Inc." all the stories I've written are on both sites with identical titles.

If you saw this story on a site besides Literotica or mcstories, it was uploaded without my knowledge or permission, and I'd love to be made aware of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Would like to read more of this tale

Gonna call it now: The old man who gives Jeremy the remote is actually himself many years older. It's not a bad trope for having been used before. I would still like to read more about Jeremy and what he does.

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