All Comments on 'Stand and Deliver Ch. 01'

I do like the way you are building this up, but to me it seems a little too drawn out I am not really a patience person, there were sections I skipped because it was too drawn out and I do not like surprises so if this were to happen to me, not to sound bad but it would have ended after the first computer message because it seems she is just playing with her feelings, and it feels like so is her momma because she does not want to help her to find out if it is really her childhood friend Jan, but I guess we will see in part 2, I just hope it is different from part 1, and yes it is better than your other stories

agree a great start, have liked all your stories, can't wait to read more. please hurry.

See it takes all kinds, I love that it's drawn out! Also the mom is being supportive but letting her discover her own way! Can't wait for more! Thanks for sharing your story!

I really enjoyed this first chapter and am eagerly anticipating the next one. I like how supportive and understanding her mum is about her sexuality. 5 stars.

I have to admit when I write a story I never know what will happen. Sadly I was not happy with the way this story was going as it headed towards the end. So I have had to change it quite a bit and hopefully will be finished quite soon.

Great story, interesting characters, well written. Eagerly awaiting how this comes out! I love the way her mother is so supportive, the kind of unconditional love you expect from a mother, but rarely find (at least from my experience, and many that I have known).

I can't wait for the next chapter! So yummy! Thank you!

And a wonderful storyteller. I think I'm in love.

Please More! More! More! :)

Very well written and leaving us tantalized for another dozen chapters...Please don't make us wait too long before the next installment.